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翻訳: WCAG 2 の背景、WCAG 2 ガイダンスのレイヤー #31
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「参考達成方法」とリンクの間にカンマがありますが翻訳では落ちているようです。「や」でもいれておくと良いでしょうか。
"to this community" を「このコミュニティにとって」としていますが、この this community は "individuals with all types, degrees, or combinations of disability, particularly in the cognitive, language, and learning areas" を短く言い換えたものだと思われます。カタカナで「コミュニティ」とするとピンとこないのではないでしょうか。現状のWCAG 2.1日本語訳では「こうした人たち」としているようで、そちらのほうが良さそうに思います。
as well as は「だけでなく」で意味的には正しいのですが、現状のWCAG 2.1日本語訳では「とともに」としていて、この文脈ではそちらのほうが読みやすいように思いました。
「こうした人たちにとって可能な限りウェブコンテンツがアクセシブルであることを確実にするための最新のベストプラクティスに関する適切な助言を求めることを勧める」は日本語としてとてつもなく読みにくいので、どこかに読点を入れたいです。
"metadata"のリンク先はそういうタイトルの文書ではなく、対応する2.1の日本語訳としてはメタデータを理解するとなっているものなので、「メタデータ」としてしまって良いように思います。
そんなこんなで、このようにしてはどうでしょうか?
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「や」とするのであれば、ここは「及び」ですかね…