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Identifier Scoping and Uniqueness Documentation Review #1066

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Rene2mt opened this issue Dec 9, 2021 · 4 comments · Fixed by #1263
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Identifier Scoping and Uniqueness Documentation Review #1066

Rene2mt opened this issue Dec 9, 2021 · 4 comments · Fixed by #1263
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Aged A label for issues older than 2023-01-01 Epic A collection of issues to be worked on over a series of sprints ongoing effort Scope: Documentation This issue relates to OSCAL documentation.

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Rene2mt commented Dec 9, 2021

This issue is for a comprehensive review of the changes made in PR#941to ensure documentation describes identifier uniqueness and scoping clearly and accurately. The (peer) review should include the following:

Concepts - Identifier User Page Peer Review (see added Identifier Use page )

  • Clear description of identifier types
  • Clear description of identifier description
  • Clear description of identifier scope (review tables)

Metaschemas to Peer Review: (see metaschema identifier description changes)

  • Common
    • Oscal_metadata_metaschema.xml
  • Control Layer (Review Control layer models #1331)
    • Oscal_control-common_metaschema.xml
    • Oscal_catalog_metaschema.xml
    • Oscal_profile_metaschema.xml
  • Implementation Layer
  • Assessment Layer
    • Oscal_assessment-common_metaschema.xml
    • Oscal_assessment-plan_metaschema.xml
    • Oscal_assessment-results_metaschema.xml
    • Oscal_poam_metaschema.xml

Peer Review Checklist for each of the Metaschemas listed above:

  • Check all "Identifier Declarations" for the following:
    • Description is satisfactory (e.g., specific enough, grammatically correct, etc.)
    • Description clearly states if identifier is "machine-oriented" or "human oriented"
    • Description clearly states the uniqueness of the identifier (e.g. locally vs globally unique)
    • Description clearly states if the scope (e.g. instance vs cross-instance)
    • Description is clear in how to externally reference the identifier (e.g. if the OSCAL resource where the identifier is defined is imported into another OSCAL instance)
    • Description clearly states how revision to the containing OSCAL instance impact the identifier
  • Check all "Identifier References" for the following:
    • Description is satisfactory (e.g., specific enough, grammatically correct, etc.)
    • When applicable, indicates the source (local or imported document) of the identifier being referenced
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As follow-on work, we could normalize the description to be one or two sentences. The first sentence fragment might start with a verb that describes what the thing does. Such as "Describes what the thing does."

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Need to extract RMF constraints into an external constraints file.

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Worthy of mention: UUIDs are not case-sensitive, thus uniqueness and comparisons are not simple equalities.

wendellpiez added a commit to wendellpiez/OSCAL that referenced this issue Aug 26, 2022
david-waltermire added a commit to david-waltermire/OSCAL that referenced this issue Sep 9, 2022
* Responding to usnistgov#1066: metaschema edits; CSS enhancement
* Whitespace cleanup in metadata metaschema
* Apply suggestions from code review

Co-authored-by: David Waltermire <[email protected]>
david-waltermire added a commit to david-waltermire/OSCAL that referenced this issue Sep 26, 2022
* Responding to usnistgov#1066: metaschema edits; CSS enhancement
* Whitespace cleanup in metadata metaschema
* Apply suggestions from code review

Co-authored-by: David Waltermire <[email protected]>
david-waltermire added a commit that referenced this issue Sep 27, 2022
* completed partial update of the Metadata object documentation.
* adjustments to roles
* adjusted the cardinality of location/address to make address optional.
* Improved documentation and constraints related to location and parties
* addressed the remainder of metadata and control feedback from @Rene2mt.
* Improved the introductory remarks for a profile to better describe what a profile is and what it does.
* Fixed a broken constraint that was not targeting the right node.
* started refining descriptions and adding properties to describe identifier attributes.
* Addressed feedback from AJ during 20220718-20220722. (#48)
* Week 30 feedback on SSP model. (#49)
* Proposed metaschema docs updates (#50)
* Addressed feedback based on #1392
* Adjustments based on model review feedback on 8/12.
* Removed outdated merge phase remarks. Created issue #53 to address this.
* Addressed A.J. Stein's Week 32 Feedback for Model Review (#52)
* Addressed AJ Stein's week 32 feedback for #1331.
* Addressed DRAFT: Update catalog & profile metaschema documentation (#51)
* Update catalog & profile metaschema documentation
* Add props to control identifier
* Fixed broken syntax and addressed consistency in wording within the Profile 'merge' construct.
* Adjustments to alter, moving to to an inline definition
* cleaned up empty remark.
* Removed redundant constraints
* removed some redundant constraints
* Preliminary work on URI documentation to address #1249.
* More work on document URI use in OSCAL
* Updating data types related to usnistgov/metaschema#224.
* Improved consistency of how URI concepts are discussed.
* Added note about party locations
* Updated Metaschema instances of `uri` and `uri-reference` data types to indicate their URI semantics. Resolves #1249.
* Added identifier props to control layer metaschemas (#55)
* Responding to #1066: metaschema edits; CSS enhancement (#56)
* Whitespace cleanup in metadata metaschema
* Apply suggestions from code review

Co-authored-by: Alexander Stein <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Wendell Piez <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Rene Tshiteya <[email protected]>
aj-stein-nist added a commit that referenced this issue Oct 18, 2022
* completed partial update of the Metadata object documentation.
* adjustments to roles
* adjusted the cardinality of location/address to make address optional.
* Improved documentation and constraints related to location and parties
* addressed the remainder of metadata and control feedback from @Rene2mt.
* Improved the introductory remarks for a profile to better describe what a profile is and what it does.
* Fixed a broken constraint that was not targeting the right node.
* started refining descriptions and adding properties to describe identifier attributes.
* Addressed feedback from AJ during 20220718-20220722. (#48)
* Week 30 feedback on SSP model. (#49)
* Proposed metaschema docs updates (#50)
* Addressed feedback based on #1392
* Adjustments based on model review feedback on 8/12.
* Removed outdated merge phase remarks. Created issue #53 to address this.
* Addressed A.J. Stein's Week 32 Feedback for Model Review (#52)
* Addressed AJ Stein's week 32 feedback for #1331.
* Addressed DRAFT: Update catalog & profile metaschema documentation (#51)
* Update catalog & profile metaschema documentation
* Add props to control identifier
* Fixed broken syntax and addressed consistency in wording within the Profile 'merge' construct.
* Adjustments to alter, moving to to an inline definition
* cleaned up empty remark.
* Removed redundant constraints
* removed some redundant constraints
* Preliminary work on URI documentation to address #1249.
* More work on document URI use in OSCAL
* Updating data types related to usnistgov/metaschema#224.
* Improved consistency of how URI concepts are discussed.
* Added note about party locations
* Updated Metaschema instances of `uri` and `uri-reference` data types to indicate their URI semantics. Resolves #1249.
* Added identifier props to control layer metaschemas (#55)
* Responding to #1066: metaschema edits; CSS enhancement (#56)
* Whitespace cleanup in metadata metaschema
* Apply suggestions from code review

Co-authored-by: Alexander Stein <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Wendell Piez <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Rene Tshiteya <[email protected]>
david-waltermire added a commit that referenced this issue Oct 31, 2022
* completed partial update of the Metadata object documentation.
* adjustments to roles
* adjusted the cardinality of location/address to make address optional.
* Improved documentation and constraints related to location and parties
* addressed the remainder of metadata and control feedback from @Rene2mt.
* Improved the introductory remarks for a profile to better describe what a profile is and what it does.
* Fixed a broken constraint that was not targeting the right node.
* started refining descriptions and adding properties to describe identifier attributes.
* Addressed feedback from AJ during 20220718-20220722. (#48)
* Week 30 feedback on SSP model. (#49)
* Proposed metaschema docs updates (#50)
* Addressed feedback based on #1392
* Adjustments based on model review feedback on 8/12.
* Removed outdated merge phase remarks. Created issue #53 to address this.
* Addressed A.J. Stein's Week 32 Feedback for Model Review (#52)
* Addressed AJ Stein's week 32 feedback for #1331.
* Addressed DRAFT: Update catalog & profile metaschema documentation (#51)
* Update catalog & profile metaschema documentation
* Add props to control identifier
* Fixed broken syntax and addressed consistency in wording within the Profile 'merge' construct.
* Adjustments to alter, moving to to an inline definition
* cleaned up empty remark.
* Removed redundant constraints
* removed some redundant constraints
* Preliminary work on URI documentation to address #1249.
* More work on document URI use in OSCAL
* Updating data types related to usnistgov/metaschema#224.
* Improved consistency of how URI concepts are discussed.
* Added note about party locations
* Updated Metaschema instances of `uri` and `uri-reference` data types to indicate their URI semantics. Resolves #1249.
* Added identifier props to control layer metaschemas (#55)
* Responding to #1066: metaschema edits; CSS enhancement (#56)
* Whitespace cleanup in metadata metaschema
* Apply suggestions from code review

Co-authored-by: Alexander Stein <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Wendell Piez <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Rene Tshiteya <[email protected]>
aj-stein-nist added a commit to aj-stein-nist/OSCAL-forked that referenced this issue Jan 10, 2023
…1263)

* completed partial update of the Metadata object documentation.
* adjustments to roles
* adjusted the cardinality of location/address to make address optional.
* Improved documentation and constraints related to location and parties
* addressed the remainder of metadata and control feedback from @Rene2mt.
* Improved the introductory remarks for a profile to better describe what a profile is and what it does.
* Fixed a broken constraint that was not targeting the right node.
* started refining descriptions and adding properties to describe identifier attributes.
* Addressed feedback from AJ during 20220718-20220722. (#48)
* Week 30 feedback on SSP model. (#49)
* Proposed metaschema docs updates (#50)
* Addressed feedback based on usnistgov#1392
* Adjustments based on model review feedback on 8/12.
* Removed outdated merge phase remarks. Created issue #53 to address this.
* Addressed A.J. Stein's Week 32 Feedback for Model Review (#52)
* Addressed AJ Stein's week 32 feedback for usnistgov#1331.
* Addressed DRAFT: Update catalog & profile metaschema documentation (#51)
* Update catalog & profile metaschema documentation
* Add props to control identifier
* Fixed broken syntax and addressed consistency in wording within the Profile 'merge' construct.
* Adjustments to alter, moving to to an inline definition
* cleaned up empty remark.
* Removed redundant constraints
* removed some redundant constraints
* Preliminary work on URI documentation to address usnistgov#1249.
* More work on document URI use in OSCAL
* Updating data types related to usnistgov/metaschema#224.
* Improved consistency of how URI concepts are discussed.
* Added note about party locations
* Updated Metaschema instances of `uri` and `uri-reference` data types to indicate their URI semantics. Resolves usnistgov#1249.
* Added identifier props to control layer metaschemas (#55)
* Responding to usnistgov#1066: metaschema edits; CSS enhancement (#56)
* Whitespace cleanup in metadata metaschema
* Apply suggestions from code review

Co-authored-by: Alexander Stein <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Wendell Piez <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Rene Tshiteya <[email protected]>
aj-stein-nist added a commit to aj-stein-nist/OSCAL-forked that referenced this issue Feb 6, 2023
…1263)

* completed partial update of the Metadata object documentation.
* adjustments to roles
* adjusted the cardinality of location/address to make address optional.
* Improved documentation and constraints related to location and parties
* addressed the remainder of metadata and control feedback from @Rene2mt.
* Improved the introductory remarks for a profile to better describe what a profile is and what it does.
* Fixed a broken constraint that was not targeting the right node.
* started refining descriptions and adding properties to describe identifier attributes.
* Addressed feedback from AJ during 20220718-20220722. (#48)
* Week 30 feedback on SSP model. (#49)
* Proposed metaschema docs updates (#50)
* Addressed feedback based on usnistgov#1392
* Adjustments based on model review feedback on 8/12.
* Removed outdated merge phase remarks. Created issue #53 to address this.
* Addressed A.J. Stein's Week 32 Feedback for Model Review (#52)
* Addressed AJ Stein's week 32 feedback for usnistgov#1331.
* Addressed DRAFT: Update catalog & profile metaschema documentation (#51)
* Update catalog & profile metaschema documentation
* Add props to control identifier
* Fixed broken syntax and addressed consistency in wording within the Profile 'merge' construct.
* Adjustments to alter, moving to to an inline definition
* cleaned up empty remark.
* Removed redundant constraints
* removed some redundant constraints
* Preliminary work on URI documentation to address usnistgov#1249.
* More work on document URI use in OSCAL
* Updating data types related to usnistgov/metaschema#224.
* Improved consistency of how URI concepts are discussed.
* Added note about party locations
* Updated Metaschema instances of `uri` and `uri-reference` data types to indicate their URI semantics. Resolves usnistgov#1249.
* Added identifier props to control layer metaschemas (#55)
* Responding to usnistgov#1066: metaschema edits; CSS enhancement (#56)
* Whitespace cleanup in metadata metaschema
* Apply suggestions from code review

Co-authored-by: Alexander Stein <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Wendell Piez <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Rene Tshiteya <[email protected]>
aj-stein-nist added a commit to aj-stein-nist/OSCAL-forked that referenced this issue Jun 29, 2023
…1263)

* completed partial update of the Metadata object documentation.
* adjustments to roles
* adjusted the cardinality of location/address to make address optional.
* Improved documentation and constraints related to location and parties
* addressed the remainder of metadata and control feedback from @Rene2mt.
* Improved the introductory remarks for a profile to better describe what a profile is and what it does.
* Fixed a broken constraint that was not targeting the right node.
* started refining descriptions and adding properties to describe identifier attributes.
* Addressed feedback from AJ during 20220718-20220722. (#48)
* Week 30 feedback on SSP model. (#49)
* Proposed metaschema docs updates (#50)
* Addressed feedback based on usnistgov#1392
* Adjustments based on model review feedback on 8/12.
* Removed outdated merge phase remarks. Created issue #53 to address this.
* Addressed A.J. Stein's Week 32 Feedback for Model Review (#52)
* Addressed AJ Stein's week 32 feedback for usnistgov#1331.
* Addressed DRAFT: Update catalog & profile metaschema documentation (#51)
* Update catalog & profile metaschema documentation
* Add props to control identifier
* Fixed broken syntax and addressed consistency in wording within the Profile 'merge' construct.
* Adjustments to alter, moving to to an inline definition
* cleaned up empty remark.
* Removed redundant constraints
* removed some redundant constraints
* Preliminary work on URI documentation to address usnistgov#1249.
* More work on document URI use in OSCAL
* Updating data types related to usnistgov/metaschema#224.
* Improved consistency of how URI concepts are discussed.
* Added note about party locations
* Updated Metaschema instances of `uri` and `uri-reference` data types to indicate their URI semantics. Resolves usnistgov#1249.
* Added identifier props to control layer metaschemas (#55)
* Responding to usnistgov#1066: metaschema edits; CSS enhancement (#56)
* Whitespace cleanup in metadata metaschema
* Apply suggestions from code review

Co-authored-by: Alexander Stein <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Wendell Piez <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Rene Tshiteya <[email protected]>
aj-stein-nist added a commit to aj-stein-nist/OSCAL-forked that referenced this issue Jul 10, 2023
…1263)

* completed partial update of the Metadata object documentation.
* adjustments to roles
* adjusted the cardinality of location/address to make address optional.
* Improved documentation and constraints related to location and parties
* addressed the remainder of metadata and control feedback from @Rene2mt.
* Improved the introductory remarks for a profile to better describe what a profile is and what it does.
* Fixed a broken constraint that was not targeting the right node.
* started refining descriptions and adding properties to describe identifier attributes.
* Addressed feedback from AJ during 20220718-20220722. (#48)
* Week 30 feedback on SSP model. (#49)
* Proposed metaschema docs updates (#50)
* Addressed feedback based on usnistgov#1392
* Adjustments based on model review feedback on 8/12.
* Removed outdated merge phase remarks. Created issue #53 to address this.
* Addressed A.J. Stein's Week 32 Feedback for Model Review (#52)
* Addressed AJ Stein's week 32 feedback for usnistgov#1331.
* Addressed DRAFT: Update catalog & profile metaschema documentation (#51)
* Update catalog & profile metaschema documentation
* Add props to control identifier
* Fixed broken syntax and addressed consistency in wording within the Profile 'merge' construct.
* Adjustments to alter, moving to to an inline definition
* cleaned up empty remark.
* Removed redundant constraints
* removed some redundant constraints
* Preliminary work on URI documentation to address usnistgov#1249.
* More work on document URI use in OSCAL
* Updating data types related to usnistgov/metaschema#224.
* Improved consistency of how URI concepts are discussed.
* Added note about party locations
* Updated Metaschema instances of `uri` and `uri-reference` data types to indicate their URI semantics. Resolves usnistgov#1249.
* Added identifier props to control layer metaschemas (#55)
* Responding to usnistgov#1066: metaschema edits; CSS enhancement (#56)
* Whitespace cleanup in metadata metaschema
* Apply suggestions from code review

Co-authored-by: Alexander Stein <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Wendell Piez <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Rene Tshiteya <[email protected]>
@aj-stein-nist aj-stein-nist removed this from the v1.1.0 milestone Jul 27, 2023
@aj-stein-nist aj-stein-nist moved this from Todo to Needs Refinement in NIST OSCAL Work Board Sep 27, 2023
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As an epic predating #1688 board reorganization, I will want to label this as needs refinement for now until it can be broken down, rescoped, and or closed.

aj-stein-nist added a commit to galtm/OSCAL that referenced this issue Sep 28, 2023
…1263)

* completed partial update of the Metadata object documentation.
* adjustments to roles
* adjusted the cardinality of location/address to make address optional.
* Improved documentation and constraints related to location and parties
* addressed the remainder of metadata and control feedback from @Rene2mt.
* Improved the introductory remarks for a profile to better describe what a profile is and what it does.
* Fixed a broken constraint that was not targeting the right node.
* started refining descriptions and adding properties to describe identifier attributes.
* Addressed feedback from AJ during 20220718-20220722. (#48)
* Week 30 feedback on SSP model. (#49)
* Proposed metaschema docs updates (#50)
* Addressed feedback based on usnistgov#1392
* Adjustments based on model review feedback on 8/12.
* Removed outdated merge phase remarks. Created issue #53 to address this.
* Addressed A.J. Stein's Week 32 Feedback for Model Review (#52)
* Addressed AJ Stein's week 32 feedback for usnistgov#1331.
* Addressed DRAFT: Update catalog & profile metaschema documentation (#51)
* Update catalog & profile metaschema documentation
* Add props to control identifier
* Fixed broken syntax and addressed consistency in wording within the Profile 'merge' construct.
* Adjustments to alter, moving to to an inline definition
* cleaned up empty remark.
* Removed redundant constraints
* removed some redundant constraints
* Preliminary work on URI documentation to address usnistgov#1249.
* More work on document URI use in OSCAL
* Updating data types related to usnistgov/metaschema#224.
* Improved consistency of how URI concepts are discussed.
* Added note about party locations
* Updated Metaschema instances of `uri` and `uri-reference` data types to indicate their URI semantics. Resolves usnistgov#1249.
* Added identifier props to control layer metaschemas (#55)
* Responding to usnistgov#1066: metaschema edits; CSS enhancement (#56)
* Whitespace cleanup in metadata metaschema
* Apply suggestions from code review

Co-authored-by: Alexander Stein <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Wendell Piez <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Rene Tshiteya <[email protected]>
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