Fixed errors in RPC and typos in docs #1014
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WalkthroughThe changes in this pull request consist of comprehensive updates to documentation related to OP Stack blockchains, specifically focusing on deployment configurations. Key modifications include clarifications on the Rollup configuration, the introduction of new flags and addresses, and the marking of deprecated fields. Additionally, grammatical corrections and expanded sections on interoperability and governance have been made across multiple documentation files, enhancing clarity and usability. Changes
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pages/builders/chain-operators/deploy/genesis.mdx (3)
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15-24: LGTM: Enhanced Solidity script sectionThe additions to this section significantly improve the document's usefulness. The link to the foundry script and the callout about using the same release commit are particularly helpful.
Consider adding a brief explanation of why using the same release commit is important, to further emphasize its significance.
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26-50: LGTM: Comprehensive Configuration sectionThe additions to the Configuration section provide clear and detailed instructions, significantly improving the document's usefulness. The explanation of fork detection, manual overriding, and the
OUTPUT_MODEvariable is particularly helpful.For consistency with the coding guidelines, consider changing "won't" to "will not" in the last bullet point.
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70-82: LGTM: Subcommand section improvementsThe correction of the typo in the command line argument (
--l1-starting-block) and the addition of the--l1-rpcargument enhance the accuracy and usefulness of the documentation.Consider adding a brief explanation of when a user might choose to use
--l1-rpcversus--l1-starting-blockto provide more context for these mutually exclusive options.pages/builders/chain-operators/configuration/rollup.mdx (13)
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33-134: LGTM: Comprehensive offset values added with minor suggestionThe new offset values for various network upgrades (hardforks) provide detailed and valuable information. The inclusion of type, default value, recommended value, notes, and Standard Config Requirements for each offset is thorough and helpful.
Consider clarifying the recommended values listed as "0x0". While this hexadecimal notation is correct, it might be more consistent to use decimal notation (i.e., "0") to match the format of other numeric values in the document.
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253-369: LGTM: Enhanced block-related configurations with new fieldThe updates to the "Blocks" section provide more comprehensive information and requirements for block-related configurations. The addition of Standard Config Requirements for several fields enhances the guidance for chain operators.
The new channelTimeout field is a notable addition. Consider adding a brief explanation of how this value impacts transaction processing or network performance to provide more context for users.
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371-463: LGTM: Improved Chain Information section with helpful recommendationThe updates to the "Chain Information" section provide more comprehensive details and requirements for chain-related configurations. The addition of Standard Config Requirements for several fields enhances the guidance for chain operators.
The recommendation to add chain IDs to ethereum-lists/chains for the l2ChainID field is particularly valuable. Consider adding a direct link to the ethereum-lists/chains repository to make it easier for users to follow this recommendation.
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465-575: LGTM: Comprehensive updates to Gas configurationsThe "Gas" section has been significantly enhanced with more detailed information and requirements for gas-related configurations. The addition of new fields such as eip1559DenominatorCanyon, gasPriceOracleBaseFeeScalar, and gasPriceOracleBlobBaseFeeScalar reflects recent protocol improvements and provides more granular control over gas pricing.
Consider adding brief explanations or links to relevant EIPs for the new fields (especially eip1559DenominatorCanyon) to provide more context for users who might not be familiar with these recent changes.
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577-662: LGTM: Enhanced Proposal fields section with important role clarificationThe updates to the "Proposal fields" section provide more comprehensive information and requirements for proposal-related configurations. The addition of Standard Config Requirements for several fields enhances the guidance for chain operators.
The clarification of the l2OutputOracleProposer's role in the PERMISSIONED_CANNON game type is particularly valuable. Consider adding a brief explanation or link to documentation about the PERMISSIONED_CANNON game type for users who might not be familiar with this concept.
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753-796: LGTM: Enhanced Withdrawal network section with cost considerationThe updates to the "Withdrawal network" section provide more comprehensive information about withdrawal network configurations. The addition of Standard Config Requirements for each field enhances the guidance for chain operators.
The note about the higher cost of withdrawals to Ethereum is particularly valuable. Consider expanding on this point slightly to help users understand the trade-offs between L1 and L2 withdrawals, which could aid in making informed configuration decisions.
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798-965: LGTM: Comprehensive new Fault proofs section addedThe addition of the "Fault proofs" section is a significant improvement, providing detailed information about various fault proof configurations. The inclusion of type, default value, recommended value, and notes for each field is thorough and helpful.
Given the complexity of fault proofs, consider adding:
- A brief introduction to the concept of fault proofs at the beginning of this section.
- Links to more detailed documentation or explanations for some of the more technical terms (e.g., "Cannon", "position tree", "chess clock").
- A note about the importance of these configurations for system security and integrity.
These additions would help users better understand the significance and impact of these configuration options.
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967-1006: LGTM: Valuable Custom Gas Token section addedThe addition of the "Custom Gas Token" section is a significant improvement, introducing an important feature for chain customization. The clear explanation and the inclusion of two new fields (useCustomGasToken and customGasTokenAddress) provide necessary information for implementing this feature.
Consider adding a brief note about the potential implications or risks of using a custom gas token. This could help users make more informed decisions when considering this non-standard feature.
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1008-1102: LGTM: Comprehensive Alt-DA Mode section addedThe addition of the "Alt-DA Mode" section is a significant improvement, introducing important features for integrating various Data Availability (DA) Layers. The inclusion of multiple configuration fields provides necessary information for implementing this feature.
To enhance this section further, consider:
- Adding a brief explanation of the benefits and potential trade-offs of using Alt-DA Mode.
- Providing examples or use cases where Alt-DA Mode might be particularly beneficial.
- Including a note about compatibility considerations with other parts of the system when using Alt-DA Mode.
These additions would help users better understand when and how to use this non-standard feature effectively.
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1104-1118: LGTM: Important Interoperability section addedThe addition of the "Interoperability" section is valuable, introducing an important experimental feature. The clear indication that this is a non-standard and experimental feature is crucial for users.
Consider expanding this section slightly to include:
- A brief explanation of what interoperability enables in this context.
- Potential use cases or benefits of enabling interoperability.
- Any known limitations or risks associated with using this experimental feature.
This additional information would help users make more informed decisions about whether to enable interoperability in their configurations.
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1120-1168: LGTM: Valuable Governance section addedThe addition of the "Governance" section is a significant improvement, introducing important configurations for governance token implementation. The inclusion of multiple fields provides necessary information for setting up governance mechanisms.
To enhance this section further, consider:
- Adding a brief introduction explaining the purpose and importance of governance in the context of OP Stack chains.
- Providing more context or examples for each field to help users understand their impact on the governance system.
- If possible, include some general guidance or best practices for setting up governance, even if specific Standard Config Requirements are not provided.
These additions would help users better understand the implications of their governance configuration choices.
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1170-1204: LGTM: Useful Miscellaneous sectionThe "Miscellaneous" section covers important additional configurations that don't fit into other categories. The inclusion of fields for development account funding and protocol version management is valuable.
Consider adding brief explanations or use cases for each field, particularly for requiredProtocolVersion and recommendedProtocolVersion. This would help users understand the implications of these settings and when they might need to update them.
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1206-1228: LGTM: Clear Deprecated sectionThe "Deprecated" section effectively identifies fields that are no longer in use, which is crucial for maintaining and updating existing configurations. The inclusion of reasons for deprecation for some fields is particularly helpful.
For consistency, consider adding a brief explanation for why deploymentWaitConfirmations is deprecated, similar to the explanations provided for the other two fields. This would provide a complete picture of why these fields are no longer in use.
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Context: ...and USDC is often bridged to new chains prior to any action from Circle. This can create...(EN_WORDINESS_PREMIUM_PRIOR_TO)
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pages/builders/chain-operators/deploy/genesis.mdx (2)
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1-5: LGTM: Title and description improvementsThe updates to the title and description enhance clarity and specificity. The title now correctly uses sentence case, adhering to the coding guidelines. The description is concise and informative.
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52-68: LGTM: Improved Creation sectionThe additions to the Creation section, particularly the definitions of the various paths, enhance the clarity of the document. The example command is well-formatted and easy to understand.
pages/builders/chain-operators/configuration/rollup.mdx (6)
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1-20: LGTM: Improved introduction and added helpful warningThe updated introduction and added warning callout enhance the document's clarity and set appropriate expectations for readers regarding the evolving nature of the Rollup configuration.
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22-31: LGTM: Added informative callout on Standard configurationThe new callout effectively explains the concept of Standard Chain within the Superchain and provides relevant references for further information. This addition enhances the document's value for readers.
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136-182: LGTM: Enhanced admin addresses section with important detailsThe updates to the "Admin addresses" section provide valuable information about the finalSystemOwner and proxyAdminOwner. The addition of Standard Config Requirements, especially the specific address requirement for the L1 ProxyAdmin owner, enhances the security considerations of the configuration.
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184-251: LGTM: Added crucial Standard Config Requirements for proxy addressesThe addition of Standard Config Requirements for each proxy address is a significant improvement. These requirements ensure that implementation contracts are kept up-to-date and governance-approved, which is crucial for maintaining the security and consistency of the system.
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664-751: LGTM: Improved Fee recipients and Minimum fee withdrawal amounts sectionsThe updates to the "Fee recipients" and "Minimum fee withdrawal amounts" sections provide more comprehensive information about fee-related configurations. The addition of Standard Config Requirements and more detailed explanations enhances the understanding of these important financial aspects of the system.
The added context about the purpose of minimum withdrawal amounts, particularly in relation to preventing economically unviable withdrawals, is especially helpful for users configuring these values.
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1-1228: LGTM: Comprehensive and valuable updates to Rollup configuration documentationThis document has undergone significant improvements, greatly enhancing its value for chain operators configuring OP Stack deployments. Key enhancements include:
- Addition of Standard Config Requirements for many fields, providing clear guidance for standardized deployments.
- Introduction of new sections covering important features like Custom Gas Token, Alt-DA Mode, and Interoperability.
- More detailed explanations and context for various configuration options.
- Clear identification of deprecated fields and non-standard features.
These updates make the document more comprehensive, up-to-date, and user-friendly. The additional context and explanations will help users make more informed decisions when configuring their OP Stack deployments.
While the document is now in excellent shape, consider periodically reviewing and updating it as the OP Stack evolves to ensure it remains current and valuable for users.
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Corrected serious grammar l and spelling errors, along with typos found in the docs. These changes are not merely cosmetic but represent a significant improvement in the quality of the text, making it easier for both users and developers to understand. This PR does not add new features or fix code bugs, but it enhances the quality of the project’s documentation.
• Fixed major errors in the text that affected its readability and accuracy.
• Corrected typos that could lead to confusion.
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