First time flow updates #6192

danjm · 2019-02-20T20:24:04Z

Final design decisions pending. Tests will be updated once design decisions finalized.

…e flow.

metamaskbot · 2019-02-26T16:36:00Z

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whymarrh

I left a few comments inline. Also, if we're removing the notices should we also remove the components and files (the notices/ directory?) associated with them?

whymarrh · 2019-02-26T16:58:32Z

app/_locales/en/messages.json

+    "message": "Be careful with your seed phrase — there have been reports of websites that attempt to imitate MetaMask. MetaMask will never spontaneously ask for your seed phrase!"
+  },
+  "protectYourKeysMessage2": {
+    "message": "Keep your phrase safe. If you see something phishy, or you’re uncertain about a website, email [email protected]."


Should "phishy" here be "fishy"? Fishy seems like actual word^[1][2][3][4] for this context?

Also, do we want to have the period at the end of the sentence following the email address? I don't have a strong opinion either way, but it could be confusing to some users who will inevitably copy and paste the address with a period.

Done in e7b8ea021

whymarrh · 2019-02-26T16:59:59Z

test/e2e/beta/run-all.sh

@@ -6,6 +6,6 @@ set -o pipefail

 export PATH="$PATH:./node_modules/.bin"

-shell-parallel -s 'npm run ganache:start -- -b 2' -x 'sleep 5 && static-server test/e2e/beta/contract-test --port 8080' -x 'sleep 5 && mocha test/e2e/beta/metamask-beta-ui.spec'
+# shell-parallel -s 'npm run ganache:start -- -b 2' -x 'sleep 5 && static-server test/e2e/beta/contract-test --port 8080' -x 'sleep 5 && mocha test/e2e/beta/metamask-beta-ui.spec'


Why are we disabling these tests?

Fixed in ac872717b

whymarrh · 2019-02-26T17:02:31Z

...first-time-flow/create-password/import-with-seed-phrase/import-with-seed-phrase.component.js

@@ -131,20 +131,26 @@ export default class ImportWithSeedPhrase extends PureComponent {
    return !passwordError && !confirmPasswordError && !seedPhraseError
  }

+  toggleTermsCheck = () => {
+    this.setState({


We should prefer the updater function argument here. That is,

this.setState((prevState) => ({ termsChecked: !prevState.termsChecked, })

Done in ac872717b

whymarrh · 2019-02-26T17:02:56Z

...first-time-flow/create-password/import-with-seed-phrase/import-with-seed-phrase.component.js

+            {termsChecked ? <i className="fa fa-check fa-2x" /> : null}
+          </div>
+          <span className="first-time-flow__checkbox-label">
+            I agree to the Terms Of Service


Should we extract this into a message string?

Done in e7b8ea021

whymarrh · 2019-02-26T17:03:32Z

ui/app/components/pages/first-time-flow/create-password/new-account/new-account.component.js

@@ -111,12 +112,29 @@ export default class NewAccount extends PureComponent {
    history.push(INITIALIZE_IMPORT_WITH_SEED_PHRASE_ROUTE)
  }

+  toggleTermsCheck = () => {
+    this.setState({


We should prefer the updater function argument here. That is,

this.setState((prevState) => ({ termsChecked: !prevState.termsChecked, })

Fixed in 51fb72b40

whymarrh · 2019-02-26T17:04:27Z

ui/app/components/pages/first-time-flow/create-password/new-account/new-account.component.js

+              {termsChecked ? <i className="fa fa-check fa-2x" /> : null}
+            </div>
+            <span className="first-time-flow__checkbox-label">
+              I agree to the Terms Of Service


Should we extract this into a message string?

Done in e7b8ea021

whymarrh · 2019-02-26T17:05:19Z

ui/app/components/pages/first-time-flow/create-password/unique-image/unique-image.component.js

          className="first-time-flow__button"
-          onClick={() => history.push(INITIALIZE_NOTICE_ROUTE)}
+          onClick={async () => {


Why is this handler async?

Fixed in ac872717b

whymarrh · 2019-02-26T17:06:46Z

ui/app/components/pages/first-time-flow/end-of-flow/end-of-flow.component.js

+            history.push(DEFAULT_ROUTE)
+          }}
+        >
+          { 'All Done' }


Can we inline all of the strings in this component? Or maybe we should even extract them into message strings?

Fixed in e7b8ea021

whymarrh · 2019-02-26T17:08:18Z

ui/app/components/pages/first-time-flow/select-action/select-action.component.js

+import React, { PureComponent } from 'react'
+import PropTypes from 'prop-types'
+import Button from '../../../button'
+import { INITIALIZE_CREATE_PASSWORD_ROUTE, INITIALIZE_NOTICE_ROUTE, INITIALIZE_IMPORT_WITH_SEED_PHRASE_ROUTE } from '../../../../routes'


Nitpick: can we split this import onto multiple lines?

Fixed in ac872717b

whymarrh · 2019-02-26T17:09:07Z

ui/app/components/pages/first-time-flow/select-action/select-action.component.js

+                  { 'Import Wallet' }
+                </div>
+                <div className="select-action__button-text-small">
+                  { 'Import your existing wallet using a 12 word seed phrase' }


Should we extract the messages in this component into message strings?

Done in e7b8ea021

danjm · 2019-02-27T05:01:48Z

@whymarrh noticed related code removed in 275f7c247

metamaskbot · 2019-02-27T05:07:12Z

Builds ready [275f7c2]: mascara, chrome, firefox, edge, opera

whymarrh · 2019-02-27T13:38:44Z

app/_locales/en/messages.json

+    "message": "You passed the test - keep your seedphrase safe, it's your responsibility!"
+  },
+  "endOfFlowMessage2": {
+    "message": "Tips on storing it safely "


Nitpick: trailing space

whymarrh · 2019-02-27T13:39:03Z

app/_locales/en/messages.json

+    "message": "Tips on storing it safely "
+  },
+  "endOfFlowMessage3": {
+    "message": "• Save a backup in multiple places"


Nit: can we factor out the bullet?

whymarrh · 2019-02-27T13:39:10Z

app/_locales/en/messages.json

+    "message": "• Save a backup in multiple places"
+  },
+  "endOfFlowMessage4": {
+    "message": "• Never tell anyone"


Nit: can we factor out the bullet?

whymarrh · 2019-02-27T13:39:20Z

app/_locales/en/messages.json

+    "message": "If you need to back it up again, you can find them in Settings -> Security."
+  },
+  "endOfFlowMessage6": {
+    "message": "*Metamask cannot recover your seedphrase. Learn more."


Nit: can we factor out the bullet?

Nit: also s/Metamask/MetaMask/

whymarrh · 2019-02-27T13:40:22Z

app/_locales/en/messages.json

+    "message": "• Never tell anyone"
+  },
+  "endOfFlowMessage5": {
+    "message": "If you need to back it up again, you can find them in Settings -> Security."


Nit: s/find them/find it/ I think? Or maybe s/back it up/back them up/ if that works?

whymarrh · 2019-02-27T13:41:43Z

app/_locales/en/messages.json

+    "message": "Protect Your Keys!"
+  },
+  "protectYourKeysMessage1": {
+    "message": "Be careful with your seed phrase — there have been reports of websites that attempt to imitate MetaMask. MetaMask will never spontaneously ask for your seed phrase!"


Nit: should we drop "spontaneously"? Below we have yourUniqueAccountImageDescription3 plainly saying never.

…option.

metamaskbot · 2019-02-27T14:17:35Z

Builds ready [5771a6f]: mascara, chrome, firefox, edge, opera

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Metametrics #6171

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Action select step of onboarding flow added.

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Update navigation on create and import password screens.

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Adds terms of service checkbox to create and import account screens.

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Add security warning to jazzicon intro step

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Update and streamline unique image to confirm seed steps of first tim…

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UI touch ups to welcome screen.

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UI touch up on select action page

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Fix first time import flow.

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Add end of flow screen to first time flow

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Replace unique image screen with updated fishing warning screen.

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Update e2e tests for onboarding flow changes.

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Add required translations to onboarding flow.

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…option.

Clean up onboarding flow code.

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Remove notice related code from first-time-flow directory.

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Use updater function argument in new-account.component

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