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Fix grammar in Core Data Model section.
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msporny committed Aug 4, 2024
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<p>
A [=verifiable presentation=] is <dfn class="lint-ignore">created</dfn> by a
[=holder=], can express data from multiple [=verifiable credentials=], and can
contain arbitrary additional data encoded as JSON-LD. They are used to present
[=claims=] to a [=verifier=]. It is also possible to present [=verifiable
credentials=] directly.
contain arbitrary additional data. They are used to present [=claims=] to a
[=verifier=]. It is also possible to present [=verifiable credentials=]
directly.
</p>

<p>
The data in a [=presentation=] is often about the same [=subject=], but
might have been issued by multiple [=issuers=]. The aggregation of this
information typically expresses an aspect of a person, organization, or
[=entity=].
The data in a [=presentation=] is often about the same [=subject=], but might
have been issued by multiple [=issuers=]. The aggregation of this information
expresses an aspect of a person, organization, or [=entity=].
</p>

<figure id="basic-vp">
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<p id="info-graph-vp-explanation">
<a href="#info-graph-vp"></a> below shows a more complete depiction of a
[=verifiable presentation=] using an [=embedded proof=]
based on [[?VC-DATA-INTEGRITY]].
based on [[[?VC-DATA-INTEGRITY]]].
It is composed of at least four information [=graphs=].
The first of these information [=graphs=], the [=verifiable presentation graph=]
(which is the [=default graph=]), expresses the [=verifiable presentation=]
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named graph)'">
<figcaption style="text-align: center;">
Information [=graphs=] associated with a basic [=verifiable presentation=] that is using an [=embedded proof=]
based on [[[VC-DATA-INTEGRITY]]] [[?VC-DATA-INTEGRITY]].
based on [[[VC-DATA-INTEGRITY]]].
</figcaption>
</figure>

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<figcaption style="text-align: center;">
Information graphs associated with a basic [=verifiable presentation=] that is using an [=enveloping proof=]
based on JOSE [[?VC-JOSE-COSE]]. The `data:` URL refers to
the [=verifiable credential=] shown on <a href="#info-graph-vc-jwt"></a>.
Information graphs associated with a basic [=verifiable presentation=] that is
using an [=enveloping proof=] based on [[[?VC-JOSE-COSE]]]. The `data:` URL
refers to the [=verifiable credential=] shown on
<a href="#info-graph-vc-jwt"></a>.
</figcaption>
</figure>

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