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I'm okay with this change on a fundamental level, but "partition" strikes me as slightly odd for reasons I can't fully explain. @carols10cents what do you think?
Obviously "partition" is 100% correct and fine here, I think it's that it's not a word I use often and so doesn't sound like it's in the book's voice. I dunno. Happy to merge or maybe tweak ever-so-slightly.
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How about "split" instead of "partition"? |
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Yeah @steveklabnik perhaps "partition" is unnecessarily fancy. @carols10cents I really like your "split" suggestion so i updated the PR to match that :). |
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Merge pull request rust-lang#2092 from Aleru/master
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…chton Update cargo, cc, books Update `cc` to include new parallel building support. ## nomicon 3 commits in 4374786f0b4bf0606b35d5c30a9681f342e5707b..5004ad30d69f93553ceef74439fea2159d1f769e 2019-09-17 18:33:21 +0200 to 2019-10-12 19:52:40 +0200 - further clarify C11 and C/C++11 terminology (rust-lang/nomicon#169) - atomics: C11 -> C++20 (rust-lang/nomicon#168) - use sound/unsound terminology ## cargo 12 commits in a429e8cc4614a46a86322a0777a477e2baa83f1c..3a9abe3f065554a7fbc59f440df2baba4a6e47ee 2019-10-04 17:36:12 +0000 to 2019-10-15 15:55:35 +0000 - Fix typo in git index initialization error path (rust-lang/cargo#7512) - Reject feature flags in a virtual workspace. (rust-lang/cargo#7507) - Rename `overrides` to `package` in profiles. (rust-lang/cargo#7504) - Allow publishing with dev-dependencies without a version. (rust-lang/cargo#7333) - Stabilize cache-messages (rust-lang/cargo#7450) - don't lock the package cache when cleaning target dir. (rust-lang/cargo#7502) - Document rustc wrapper (rust-lang/cargo#7499) - Migrate towards exclusively using serde for `Config` (rust-lang/cargo#7456) - Re-enable some MSVC tests. (rust-lang/cargo#7492) - when -Z unstable-options not specified, don't validate --profile (rust-lang/cargo#7489) - Improve error message for cyclic dependencies (rust-lang/cargo#7470) - Some minor clippy fixes. (rust-lang/cargo#7484) ## book 7 commits in 04806c80be0f54b1290287e3f85e84bdfc0b6ec7..9bb8b161963fcebc9d9ccd732ba26f42108016d5 2019-10-01 20:20:22 -0400 to 2019-10-14 18:42:55 -0500 - Make a portion of text less ambiguous (rust-lang/book#2092) - fix heading level (rust-lang/book#2117) - Add missing "of" before `"duck typing"`. (rust-lang/book#1951) - ch18-03: no need to debug print destructured int (rust-lang/book#1991) - Subtle fix to introduce ? on Option in Chapter 9.2 (rust-lang/book#2047) - make wording clearer (rust-lang/book#1976) - Update the version of rand we use ## rust-by-example 5 commits in a6288e7407a6c4c19ea29de6d43f40c803883f21..0b111eaae36cc4b4997684be853882a59e2c7ca7 2019-10-01 10:09:14 -0300 to 2019-10-14 18:34:25 -0300 - Some fix to three files (rust-lang/rust-by-example#1280) - Add reference to Generics (rust-lang/rust-by-example#1281) - Confusing and long sentence (rust-lang/rust-by-example#1282) - Explicit mention of slice range meaning (rust-lang/rust-by-example#1277) - Updated aliasing for nll (rust-lang/rust-by-example#1276)
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Update cargo, books ## nomicon 3 commits in 4374786f0b4bf0606b35d5c30a9681f342e5707b..5004ad30d69f93553ceef74439fea2159d1f769e 2019-09-17 18:33:21 +0200 to 2019-10-12 19:52:40 +0200 - further clarify C11 and C/C++11 terminology (rust-lang/nomicon#169) - atomics: C11 -> C++20 (rust-lang/nomicon#168) - use sound/unsound terminology ## cargo 12 commits in a429e8cc4614a46a86322a0777a477e2baa83f1c..3a9abe3f065554a7fbc59f440df2baba4a6e47ee 2019-10-04 17:36:12 +0000 to 2019-10-15 15:55:35 +0000 - Fix typo in git index initialization error path (rust-lang/cargo#7512) - Reject feature flags in a virtual workspace. (rust-lang/cargo#7507) - Rename `overrides` to `package` in profiles. (rust-lang/cargo#7504) - Allow publishing with dev-dependencies without a version. (rust-lang/cargo#7333) - Stabilize cache-messages (rust-lang/cargo#7450) - don't lock the package cache when cleaning target dir. (rust-lang/cargo#7502) - Document rustc wrapper (rust-lang/cargo#7499) - Migrate towards exclusively using serde for `Config` (rust-lang/cargo#7456) - Re-enable some MSVC tests. (rust-lang/cargo#7492) - when -Z unstable-options not specified, don't validate --profile (rust-lang/cargo#7489) - Improve error message for cyclic dependencies (rust-lang/cargo#7470) - Some minor clippy fixes. (rust-lang/cargo#7484) ## book 7 commits in 04806c80be0f54b1290287e3f85e84bdfc0b6ec7..9bb8b161963fcebc9d9ccd732ba26f42108016d5 2019-10-01 20:20:22 -0400 to 2019-10-14 18:42:55 -0500 - Make a portion of text less ambiguous (rust-lang/book#2092) - fix heading level (rust-lang/book#2117) - Add missing "of" before `"duck typing"`. (rust-lang/book#1951) - ch18-03: no need to debug print destructured int (rust-lang/book#1991) - Subtle fix to introduce ? on Option in Chapter 9.2 (rust-lang/book#2047) - make wording clearer (rust-lang/book#1976) - Update the version of rand we use ## rust-by-example 5 commits in a6288e7407a6c4c19ea29de6d43f40c803883f21..0b111eaae36cc4b4997684be853882a59e2c7ca7 2019-10-01 10:09:14 -0300 to 2019-10-14 18:34:25 -0300 - Some fix to three files (rust-lang/rust-by-example#1280) - Add reference to Generics (rust-lang/rust-by-example#1281) - Confusing and long sentence (rust-lang/rust-by-example#1282) - Explicit mention of slice range meaning (rust-lang/rust-by-example#1277) - Updated aliasing for nll (rust-lang/rust-by-example#1276)
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My apologies if this seems a little nitpicky, but the way I first read "Rust lets you organize your packages into crates and your crates into modules" I incorrectly interpreted this to suggest packages are put into crates and crates are put into modules, which would lead a reader to think that modules are the largest container.
I think using the stronger language and explicitly saying "partition a package into multiple crates ..." (adding the word multiple/partition and using the singular of the larger containers) can prevent some readers from interpreting the text incorrectly.