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@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ That Elizabeth Barrett Browning was a feminist and an abolitionist despite losin
 
 And, the poem made sense. I could completely understand why she'd chosen it... to give us all one last, one _more_, message of love. I knew how to read it.
 
-Particularly, I want to remember the parallel that Mum had always been a feminist. 
+Particularly, I want to remember the parallel that mum had always been a feminist. 
 
 Once when she worked at British Telecom (would have been the early 90s), the CEO was unexpectedly passing through the office and saying hello to people.
 
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ Sorry to all the friends who have put up with my info-dumping approach to conver
 
 # There's so much more...
 
-There is so much more I could remember as a tribute, and so many more lessons you could take - her optimism and positivity is already stamped on my approach to life. But those things:
+There is so much more I could remember, and so many more lessons I could take - her optimism and positivity is already stamped on my approach to life. But these things:
 
 * what would mum do?
 * be a champion for what you think is right