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docs/attributes-registry/db.md

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ This group defines the attributes used to describe telemetry in the context of d
 | `db.operation.name`               | string | The name of the operation or command being executed. [3]                                                                                                                                                                                                                             | `findAndModify`; `HMSET`; `SELECT`                                    | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 | `db.query.parameter.<key>`        | string | The query parameters used in `db.query.text`, with `<key>` being the parameter name, and the attribute value being the parameter value. [4]                                                                                                                                          | `someval`; `55`                                                       | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 | `db.query.text`                   | string | The database query being executed.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   | `SELECT * FROM wuser_table where username = ?`; `SET mykey "WuValue"` | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
-| `db.system`                       | string | Identifies the database management system (DBMS) product as recognized from the client side. [5]                                                                                                                                                                                     | `other_sql`; `mssql`; `mssqlcompact`                                  | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
+| `db.system`                       | string | The database management system (DBMS) product as identified by the client instrumentation. [5]                                                                                                                                                                                       | `other_sql`; `mssql`; `mssqlcompact`                                  | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 
 **[1]:** If the collection name is parsed from the query, it SHOULD match the value provided in the query and may be qualified with the schema and database name.
 It is RECOMMENDED to capture the value as provided by the application without attempting to do any case normalization.
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ It is RECOMMENDED to capture the value as provided by the application without at
 **[4]:** Query parameters should only be captured when `db.query.text` is parameterized with placeholders.
 If a parameter has no name and instead is referenced only by index, then `<key>` SHOULD be the 0-based index.
 
-**[5]:** The actual DBMS may differ from the one known by the client. For example, when using PostgreSQL client library to connect to a CockroachDB, the `db.system` is set to `postgresql` based on the instrumentation best knowledge.
+**[5]:** The actual DBMS may differ from the one identified by the client. For example, when using PostgreSQL client libraries to connect to a CockroachDB, the `db.system` is set to `postgresql` based on the instrumentation's best knowledge.
 
 `db.client.connections.state` has the following list of well-known values. If one of them applies, then the respective value MUST be used; otherwise, a custom value MAY be used.
 

docs/attributes-registry/gen-ai.md

@@ -21,13 +21,13 @@ This document defines the attributes used to describe telemetry in the context o
 | `gen_ai.response.finish_reasons` | string[] | Array of reasons the model stopped generating tokens, corresponding to each generation received. | `stop`                                                                  | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 | `gen_ai.response.id`             | string   | The unique identifier for the completion.                                                        | `chatcmpl-123`                                                          | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 | `gen_ai.response.model`          | string   | The name of the LLM a response was generated from.                                               | `gpt-4-0613`                                                            | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
-| `gen_ai.system`                  | string   | The name of the Generative AI vendor as recognized from the client side. [3]                     | `openai`                                                                | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
+| `gen_ai.system`                  | string   | The Generative AI product as identified by the client instrumentation. [3]                       | `openai`                                                                | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 | `gen_ai.usage.completion_tokens` | int      | The number of tokens used in the LLM response (completion).                                      | `180`                                                                   | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 | `gen_ai.usage.prompt_tokens`     | int      | The number of tokens used in the LLM prompt.                                                     | `100`                                                                   | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 
 **[1]:** It's RECOMMENDED to format completions as JSON string matching [OpenAI messages format](https://platform.openai.com/docs/guides/text-generation)
 **[2]:** It's RECOMMENDED to format prompts as JSON string matching [OpenAI messages format](https://platform.openai.com/docs/guides/text-generation)
-**[3]:** The actual GenAI product may differ from the one known by the client. For example, when using OpenAI client library to communicate with Mistral, the `gen_ai.system` is set to `openai` based on the instrumentation best knowledge.
+**[3]:** The actual GenAI product may differ from the one identified by the client. For example, when using OpenAI client libraries to communicate with Mistral, the `gen_ai.system` is set to `openai` based on the instrumentation's best knowledge.
 
 `gen_ai.system` has the following list of well-known values. If one of them applies, then the respective value MUST be used; otherwise, a custom value MAY be used.
 

docs/attributes-registry/messaging.md

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Attributes describing telemetry around messaging systems and messaging activitie
 | `messaging.message.id`                    | string  | A value used by the messaging system as an identifier for the message, represented as a string.                                            | `452a7c7c7c7048c2f887f61572b18fc2` | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 | `messaging.operation.name`                | string  | The system-specific name of the messaging operation.                                                                                       | `ack`; `nack`; `send`              | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 | `messaging.operation.type`                | string  | A string identifying the type of the messaging operation. [7]                                                                              | `publish`; `create`; `receive`     | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
-| `messaging.system`                        | string  | Identifies the messaging product being used as recognized from the client side. [8]                                                        | `activemq`; `aws_sqs`; `eventgrid` | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
+| `messaging.system`                        | string  | The messaging system as identified by the client instrumentation. [8]                                                                      | `activemq`; `aws_sqs`; `eventgrid` | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 
 **[1]:** Instrumentations SHOULD NOT set `messaging.batch.message_count` on spans that operate with a single message. When a messaging client library supports both batch and single-message API for the same operation, instrumentations SHOULD use `messaging.batch.message_count` for batching APIs and SHOULD NOT use it for single-message APIs.
 
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ body size should be used.
 size should be used.
 
 **[7]:** If a custom value is used, it MUST be of low cardinality.
-**[8]:** The actual messaging system may differ from the one known by the client. For example, when using Kafka client library to communicate with Azure Event Hubs, the `messaging.system` is set to `kafka` based on the instrumentation best knowledge.
+**[8]:** The actual messaging system may differ from the one known by the client. For example, when using Kafka client libraries to communicate with Azure Event Hubs, the `messaging.system` is set to `kafka` based on the instrumentation's best knowledge.
 
 `messaging.operation.type` has the following list of well-known values. If one of them applies, then the respective value MUST be used; otherwise, a custom value MAY be used.
 

docs/database/database-metrics.md

@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ of `[ 0.001, 0.005, 0.01, 0.05, 0.1, 0.5, 1, 5, 10 ]`.
 <!-- semconv metric.db.client.operation.duration(full) -->
 | Attribute  | Type | Description  | Examples  | [Requirement Level](https://opentelemetry.io/docs/specs/semconv/general/attribute-requirement-level/) | Stability |
 |---|---|---|---|---|---|
-| [`db.system`](/docs/attributes-registry/db.md) | string | Identifies the database management system (DBMS) product as recognized from the client side. [1] | `other_sql`; `mssql`; `mssqlcompact` | `Required` | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
+| [`db.system`](/docs/attributes-registry/db.md) | string | The database management system (DBMS) product as identified by the client instrumentation. [1] | `other_sql`; `mssql`; `mssqlcompact` | `Required` | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 | [`db.collection.name`](/docs/attributes-registry/db.md) | string | The name of a collection (table, container) within the database. [2] | `public.users`; `customers` | `Conditionally Required` [3] | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 | [`db.namespace`](/docs/attributes-registry/db.md) | string | The name of the database, fully qualified within the server address and port. [4] | `customers`; `test.users` | `Conditionally Required` If available. | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 | [`db.operation.name`](/docs/attributes-registry/db.md) | string | The name of the operation or command being executed. [5] | `findAndModify`; `HMSET`; `SELECT` | `Conditionally Required` [6] | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ of `[ 0.001, 0.005, 0.01, 0.05, 0.1, 0.5, 1, 5, 10 ]`.
 | [`network.peer.port`](/docs/attributes-registry/network.md) | int | Peer port number of the network connection. | `65123` | `Recommended` If and only if `network.peer.address` is set. | ![Stable](https://img.shields.io/badge/-stable-lightgreen) |
 | [`server.address`](/docs/attributes-registry/server.md) | string | Name of the database host. [11] | `example.com`; `10.1.2.80`; `/tmp/my.sock` | `Recommended` | ![Stable](https://img.shields.io/badge/-stable-lightgreen) |
 
-**[1]:** The actual DBMS may differ from the one known by the client. For example, when using PostgreSQL client library to connect to a CockroachDB, the `db.system` is set to `postgresql` based on the instrumentation best knowledge.
+**[1]:** The actual DBMS may differ from the one identified by the client. For example, when using PostgreSQL client libraries to connect to a CockroachDB, the `db.system` is set to `postgresql` based on the instrumentation's best knowledge.
 
 **[2]:** If the collection name is parsed from the query, it SHOULD match the value provided in the query and may be qualified with the schema and database name.
 It is RECOMMENDED to capture the value as provided by the application without attempting to do any case normalization.

docs/database/database-spans.md

@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ These attributes will usually be the same for all operations performed over the
 <!-- semconv db(full) -->
 | Attribute  | Type | Description  | Examples  | [Requirement Level](https://opentelemetry.io/docs/specs/semconv/general/attribute-requirement-level/) | Stability |
 |---|---|---|---|---|---|
-| [`db.system`](/docs/attributes-registry/db.md) | string | Identifies the database management system (DBMS) product as recognized from the client side. [1] | `other_sql`; `mssql`; `mssqlcompact` | `Required` | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
+| [`db.system`](/docs/attributes-registry/db.md) | string | The database management system (DBMS) product as identified by the client instrumentation. [1] | `other_sql`; `mssql`; `mssqlcompact` | `Required` | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 | [`db.collection.name`](/docs/attributes-registry/db.md) | string | The name of a collection (table, container) within the database. [2] | `public.users`; `customers` | `Conditionally Required` [3] | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 | [`db.namespace`](/docs/attributes-registry/db.md) | string | The name of the database, fully qualified within the server address and port. [4] | `customers`; `test.users` | `Conditionally Required` If available. | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 | [`db.operation.name`](/docs/attributes-registry/db.md) | string | The name of the operation or command being executed. [5] | `findAndModify`; `HMSET`; `SELECT` | `Conditionally Required` [6] | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ These attributes will usually be the same for all operations performed over the
 | [`server.address`](/docs/attributes-registry/server.md) | string | Name of the database host. [12] | `example.com`; `10.1.2.80`; `/tmp/my.sock` | `Recommended` | ![Stable](https://img.shields.io/badge/-stable-lightgreen) |
 | [`db.query.parameter.<key>`](/docs/attributes-registry/db.md) | string | The query parameters used in `db.query.text`, with `<key>` being the parameter name, and the attribute value being the parameter value. [13] | `someval`; `55` | `Opt-In` | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 
-**[1]:** The actual DBMS may differ from the one known by the client. For example, when using PostgreSQL client library to connect to a CockroachDB, the `db.system` is set to `postgresql` based on the instrumentation best knowledge.
+**[1]:** The actual DBMS may differ from the one identified by the client. For example, when using PostgreSQL client libraries to connect to a CockroachDB, the `db.system` is set to `postgresql` based on the instrumentation's best knowledge.
 
 **[2]:** If the collection name is parsed from the query, it SHOULD match the value provided in the query and may be qualified with the schema and database name.
 It is RECOMMENDED to capture the value as provided by the application without attempting to do any case normalization.

docs/database/dynamodb.md

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ These attributes are filled in for all DynamoDB request types.
 |---|---|---|---|---|---|
 | [`db.system`](/docs/attributes-registry/db.md) | string | The value `dynamodb`. [1] | `dynamodb` | `Required` | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 
-**[1]:** The actual DBMS may differ from the one known by the client. For example, when using PostgreSQL client library to connect to a CockroachDB, the `db.system` is set to `postgresql` based on the instrumentation best knowledge.
+**[1]:** The actual DBMS may differ from the one identified by the client. For example, when using PostgreSQL client libraries to connect to a CockroachDB, the `db.system` is set to `postgresql` based on the instrumentation's best knowledge.
 
 `db.system` has the following list of well-known values. If one of them applies, then the respective value MUST be used; otherwise, a custom value MAY be used.
 

docs/gen-ai/llm-spans.md

@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ These attributes track input data and metadata for a request to an LLM. Each att
 | Attribute  | Type | Description  | Examples  | [Requirement Level](https://opentelemetry.io/docs/specs/semconv/general/attribute-requirement-level/) | Stability |
 |---|---|---|---|---|---|
 | [`gen_ai.request.model`](/docs/attributes-registry/gen-ai.md) | string | The name of the LLM a request is being made to. [1] | `gpt-4` | `Required` | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
-| [`gen_ai.system`](/docs/attributes-registry/gen-ai.md) | string | The name of the Generative AI vendor as recognized from the client side. [2] | `openai` | `Required` | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
+| [`gen_ai.system`](/docs/attributes-registry/gen-ai.md) | string | The Generative AI product as identified by the client instrumentation. [2] | `openai` | `Required` | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 | [`gen_ai.request.max_tokens`](/docs/attributes-registry/gen-ai.md) | int | The maximum number of tokens the LLM generates for a request. | `100` | `Recommended` | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 | [`gen_ai.request.temperature`](/docs/attributes-registry/gen-ai.md) | double | The temperature setting for the LLM request. | `0` | `Recommended` | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |
 | [`gen_ai.request.top_p`](/docs/attributes-registry/gen-ai.md) | double | The top_p sampling setting for the LLM request. | `1` | `Recommended` | ![Experimental](https://img.shields.io/badge/-experimental-blue) |