Revise landing page copy (#104)

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 title: Be seen for who you are
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-**It's tough to change your legal name and gender.** There's loads of paperwork. You have to dig up your birth certificate, find a notary, show up at a courthouse, and pay filing fees… and that's just the first step. Then comes updating your ID, social security, banks, schools, and a hundred other things.
+**Changing your legal name and gender is difficult.** From court paperwork to ID cards, social security, bank accounts, and dozens of other places—it’s a lot to manage.
 
-**We think it can be easier.** We're a trans-led team with years of experience running name change clinics. We're building a digital platform for clear, step-by-step guidance and community support, for free.
+We've been through this process and **we want it to be easier**. We’re building Namesake to help you fill out forms, track status, access financial support, and receive community guidance. You don’t have to do this alone.
 
-**The new Namesake app will launch in Massachusetts later this summer, with other states to follow.** [Join us on Discord](/chat) to get early access.
+The new Namesake app will launch in Massachusetts later this summer, with other states to follow. [Join us on Discord](/chat) for early access.
 
 Rigid systems weren't built for us, but we’ll figure them out together.