Nits And Copy Tweaks

[bensternthal]

Header Section

• Adjust coming soon (and make sure to add period at end of sentence :)

Coming soon — a new premium service with monthly technical deep dives written by industry experts and powerful new features to personalize and tailor your MDN experience.

"What" section

• Add question mark to end of header 1: What is MDN Plus?
• Add question mark and tweak wording of header 2: What does this mean for MDN Web Docs?

Tweak what is paragraph:

Note i tried to strikeout deletions and note the additional comma

MDN Plus builds on top of your much-loved core content, providing constantly-updated guides to highly-requested topics, and helping you keep your knowledge fresh and your skills sharp. In addition, MDN Plus includes a raft of tools to make MDN more powerful for you, creating a more personalized experience.

Tweak what this means paragraph

Nothing is changing with the existing MDN Web Docs content — this content will continue to be free and available to everyone. We want to provide extra value through premium content and features to help make MDN self-sustaining, on a completely opt-in basis. Again, nothing is changing with the existing MDN Web Docs!

"Whats included" section 2

• Add period to end of "unlock premium features" sentence
• Add periods to end of all sentences under icons (bookmark and annotate..., Download MDN documentation..., Display customised data sets...)

"How much will it cost"

• Remove "We're asking", from both variants
• e.g. "$5 a month or $50 a year*. Your subscription includes full access to the premium content and features."

Sign up form

• Can we make the input field bigger?
• Make the font in the signup match the font in the free form survey answer text area.
• Missing disclaimer needs to be added under "By clicking"
  • "Your information will only be used to notify you about platform availability."

Survey

• Add period after "Before you go, help us by answering some optional questions (1/2)."
• Add period after "Before you go, help us by answering some optional questions (2/2)."

Survey Results

Below is a screenshot if what I submitted, please verify what was actually recorded.

[peterbe]

Quick drive-by; https://developer.allizom.org/admin/plus/landingpagesurvey/129a62cc-7678-4ee8-926e-cd7efe7dc26b/change/ seems to match what you typed in.

[escattone]

I think we've resolved all of these via #3888 and #3889, so closing.