Solution #1315
Solution #1315
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Thank you for your hard work on this Pull Request! 😊 While your code meets most of the task requirements, there are a few critical issues that need to be addressed before we can approve it:
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feedMethod inAnimalClass: Thefeedmethod should update theis_hungryattribute toFalseafter feeding the animal. This is crucial for maintaining the correct state of the animal after it has been fed. -
Encapsulation in
feed_animalsFunction: Instead of directly accessing theappetiteattribute, thefeed_animalsfunction should use thefeedmethod. This ensures proper encapsulation and allows thefeedmethod to handle any logic related to feeding, including updating theis_hungryattribute.
Please address these issues to ensure the functionality and core requirements of the task are fully met. Once these changes are made, your code will be in great shape! Keep up the great work, and don't hesitate to reach out if you have any questions or need further assistance. 🚀
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| def feed(self) -> int: | ||
| if self.is_hungry: | ||
| print(f"Eating {self.appetite} food points...") | ||
| return self.appetite |
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The feed method should update the is_hungry attribute to False after feeding the animal. This ensures that the animal's state is correctly updated after being fed.
| total_food_points += animal.appetite | ||
| animal.feed() |
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Instead of directly accessing animal.appetite, consider using the feed method to encapsulate the feeding logic. This will also ensure that the is_hungry attribute is updated correctly if the feed method is modified to do so.
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Review Summary
Great job on implementing the Animal, Cat, and Dog classes! Your code meets the task requirements and constraints as specified. The feed method correctly updates the is_hungry attribute, and the feed_animals function uses this method to ensure proper encapsulation. However, there is a minor issue where the appetite attribute is accessed directly in the feed_animals function, which violates encapsulation principles. It's important to use the feed method to handle feeding logic to maintain encapsulation.
Despite this, your solution is approved to help you move forward with your learning. Please review the comments and make improvements to your code. Addressing these issues will enhance your understanding of object-oriented principles and improve your coding skills. Keep up the good work and continue learning from your experiences! 🚀
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| if animal.is_hungry: | ||
| total_food_points += animal.appetite |
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To adhere to encapsulation principles, you should not directly access the appetite attribute. Instead, use the feed method to handle feeding logic, which will also update the is_hungry attribute appropriately. This ensures that any logic related to feeding is encapsulated within the feed method.
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