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Solution #1296
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Hello! 😊 It looks like you're almost there, but there are a few critical issues that need to be addressed before we can approve the pull request:
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Animal Class Initialization: The
Animal
class should initialize theappetite
directly from the argument, regardless of theis_hungry
state. Currently, it setsappetite
to 0 ifis_hungry
isFalse
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Cat and Dog Class Initialization: Similarly, the
Cat
andDog
classes should initialize with a fixedappetite
of 3 and 7, respectively, without checking theis_hungry
state. The current approach incorrectly setsappetite
to 0 ifis_hungry
isFalse
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Feed Animals Function: The
feed_animals
function should sum the food points returned by thefeed
method, not directly from theappetite
attribute. This ensures that only hungry animals contribute to the total food points.
These changes are crucial to ensure the functionality aligns with the task requirements. Once these are addressed, your code will be in great shape! Keep up the good work, and I'm sure you'll nail it! 🚀
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Review Summary
Great job on implementing the Animal
class and its subclasses Cat
and Dog
, as well as the feed_animals
function! Your code meets the task requirements and constraints, and you've demonstrated a solid understanding of object-oriented programming concepts. 🎉
However, there are a few areas for improvement:
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Type Hinting: In the
feed_animals
function, consider specifying the type of elements in theanimals
list usingList[Animal]
from thetyping
module. This will enhance type checking and make your code more robust. -
Appetite Management: Setting
self.appetite
to 0 after feeding might not be ideal if you need to retain the original appetite value for future use. Consider resettingself.appetite
only if it's necessary for your application logic.
These suggestions are meant to help you refine your code and improve its functionality. Remember, addressing these issues will be beneficial for your learning journey. Keep up the great work, and continue to learn from your experiences! 🚀
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appetite = self.appetite | ||
self.appetite = 0 |
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Setting self.appetite
to 0 after feeding might not be the best approach if you want to retain the original appetite value for future use. Consider resetting self.appetite
only if necessary for your application logic.
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def feed_animals(animals: list) -> int: |
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The feed_animals
function should specify the type of elements in the animals
list for better type checking. Consider using List[Animal]
from the typing
module for the parameter type hint.
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