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alt="Reproducibility"
/>
</Icon>
<Name>Reproducible </Name>
<Name>Reproducible</Name>
<Description>
The single 'dvc repro' command reproduces experiments end-to-end.
DVC guarantees reproducibility by consistently maintaining a
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alt="Low-friction branching"
/>
</Icon>
<Name>Low friction branching </Name>
<Name>Low friction branching</Name>
<Description>
DVC fully supports instantaneous Git branching, even with large
files. Branches beautifully reflect the non-linear structure and
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<Icon>
<img src="/static/img/features/icons/storage-icon.svg" alt="" />
</Icon>
<Name>Metric tracking </Name>
<Name>Metric tracking</Name>
<Description>
Metrics are first-class citizens in DVC. DVC includes a command to
list all branches, along with metric values, to track the progress
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</Icon>
<Name>Track failures</Name>
<Description>
Bad ideas can sometimes bring more information to colleagues than
the successful ones. Retaining knowledge of failed attempts can save
Bad ideas can sometimes spark more information among colleagues than
successful ones. Retaining knowledge of failed attempts can save
time in the future. DVC is built to track everything in a
reproducible and easily accessible way.
</Description>
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const Description1 = () => (
<Description>
At any time, fetch the full context about any experiment you or your team
has run. DVC guarantees that all files and metrics will be consistent and in
the right place to reproduce the experiment or use it as a baseline for a
new iteration.
At any time, fetch the full context about any experiment you or your
colleagues have run. DVC guarantees that all files and metrics will be
consistent and in the right place to reproduce the experiment or use it as a
baseline for a new iteration.
</Description>
)

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[project](https://github.com/iterative/example-get-started), make sure you first
fetch the input data from DVC by calling `dvc pull`.

It's now extremely easy for you or anyone in your team to reproduce the result
end-to-end:
It's now extremely easy for you or any colleague in your team to reproduce the
result end-to-end:

```dvc
$ dvc repro train.dvc
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```

The same way as with Git remote, it ensures that your data files and your models
are safely stored remotely and are shareable. It means that this data could be
pulled by your team or you when you need it.
are safely stored remotely and are shareable. This means that the data can be
pulled by yourself or your colleagues whenever you need it.

Usually, you run it along with `git commit` and `git push` to save the changed
[DVC-files](/doc/user-guide/dvc-file-format).
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## Pulling data from the cloud

In order to reuse your data files, a colleague of yours can pull data the same
way from the master branch:
In order to reuse your data files, a colleague can pull data the same way from
the master branch:

```dvc
$ git clone https://github.com/dmpetrov/new_tag_classifier.git
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Rscript plot.R result.csv plots.jpg
```

7. The cache of a DVC project can be shared with your colleagues and partners
through Amazon S3, Azure Blob Storage GCP Storage, among others:
7. The cache of a DVC project can be shared with colleagues through Amazon S3,
Azure Blob Storage, GCP Storage, among others:

```dvc
$ git push
$ dvc push # push from the cache to remote storage
# On a colleague machine:
# On a colleague's machine:
$ git clone https://github.com/dataversioncontrol/myrepo.git
$ cd myrepo
$ git pull # download tracked data from remote storage
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![](/static/img/shared-server.png)

With DVC, you can easily setup a shared data storage on the server that will
allow your team to store and share data for your projects effectively, as well
as to have an instantaneous <abbr>workspace</abbr> restoration/switching speed –
similar to `git checkout` for your code.
With DVC, you can easily setup shared data storage on the server. This allows
your team to store and share data for your projects effectively, and to have an
instantaneous <abbr>workspace</abbr> restoration/switching speed – similar to
`git checkout` for your code.

### Preparation

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```

You will have to make sure that the directory has proper permissions setup, so
that every one on your team can read and write to it and can access cache files
that all your colleagues can read and write to it and can access cache files
written by others. The most straightforward way to do that is to make sure that
you and your colleagues are members of the same group (e.g. `users`) and that
your shared cache directory is owned by that group and has respective
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### Examples

You and your colleagues can work in your own <abbr>workspaces</abbr> as usual
and DVC will handle all your data in the most effective way possible. Let's say
you are cleaning up the data:
You and your colleagues can work in your own separate <abbr>workspaces</abbr> as
usual, and DVC will handle all your data in the most effective way possible.
Let's say you are cleaning up the data:

```dvc
$ dvc add raw
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$ git push
```

Your colleagues can pull the code and have both `raw` and `clean` instantly
appear in their workspace without copying anything. After this they decide to
continue building this pipeline and process the cleaned up data:
Your colleagues can pull the code and have both `raw` and `clean` data files
instantly appear in their workspace without copying anything. After this they
decide to continue building this pipeline and process the cleaned up data:

```dvc
$ git pull
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$ source tests/remotes_env
```

If another member of your team has already gone through this guide, you could
just ask for their `remotes_env` file and Google Cloud credentials, and skip any
env manipulations below.
If one of your colleagues has already gone through this guide, you could just
ask for their `remotes_env` file and Google Cloud credentials, and skip any env
manipulations below.

<details>

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