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Response to feedback on novel vaccines #1174

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Here are my responses to feedback from @RLordan and @agitter. When this merges, we may be ready to preprint (I need to run the final word version by one collaborator who is not on GitHub).

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I'm doing a quick round of review and will post my comments very soon

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Thanks for all these updates. They address the major comments I had left in the text. Most of these suggestions are formatting or word choice.

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Due to waning neutralizing antibodies and viral evolution, boosters have emerged as an important strategy in retaining the benefits of vaccination over time.
Due to waning effectiveness of vaccines over time, especially in light of viral evolution, boosters have emerged as an important strategy in retaining the benefits of vaccination over time.
Booster shots are now recommended in many places, and vaccines in the near future will likely account for multiple variants and strains of SARS-CoV-2 [@doi:10.1038/s41591-021-01230-y].
For example, in the U.S.A., the FDA recently recommended bivalent booster doses designed to account for the Omicron VOC [@url:https://www.fda.gov/news-events/press-announcements/coronavirus-covid-19-update-fda-recommends-inclusion-omicron-ba45-component-covid-19-vaccine-booster; @url:https://www.medpagetoday.com/infectiousdisease/covid19vaccine/99493; @url:https://www.fda.gov/media/159597/download].
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Define "bivalent?"

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For example, in the U.S.A., the FDA recently recommended bivalent booster doses designed to account for the Omicron VOC [@url:https://www.fda.gov/news-events/press-announcements/coronavirus-covid-19-update-fda-recommends-inclusion-omicron-ba45-component-covid-19-vaccine-booster; @url:https://www.medpagetoday.com/infectiousdisease/covid19vaccine/99493; @url:https://www.fda.gov/media/159597/download].
For example, in the U.S.A., the FDA recently recommended bivalent booster doses designed to account for the Omicron VOC [@url:https://www.fda.gov/news-events/press-announcements/coronavirus-covid-19-update-fda-recommends-inclusion-omicron-ba45-component-covid-19-vaccine-booster; @url:https://www.medpagetoday.com/infectiousdisease/covid19vaccine/99493; @url:https://www.fda.gov/media/159597/download].
In this case, bivalent refers to the fact that doses deliver both the original formulation and an updated vaccine designed for the Omicron subvariants circulating in summer 2022.

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This updated text looks good to me. However, I can't apply the suggestion because the text is now considered outdated on GitHub.

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Thank you @agitter! I'm working on the manual references still, they're almost ready.

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Due to waning neutralizing antibodies and viral evolution, boosters have emerged as an important strategy in retaining the benefits of vaccination over time.
Due to waning effectiveness of vaccines over time, especially in light of viral evolution, boosters have emerged as an important strategy in retaining the benefits of vaccination over time.
Booster shots are now recommended in many places, and vaccines in the near future will likely account for multiple variants and strains of SARS-CoV-2 [@doi:10.1038/s41591-021-01230-y].
For example, in the U.S.A., the FDA recently recommended bivalent booster doses designed to account for the Omicron VOC [@url:https://www.fda.gov/news-events/press-announcements/coronavirus-covid-19-update-fda-recommends-inclusion-omicron-ba45-component-covid-19-vaccine-booster; @url:https://www.medpagetoday.com/infectiousdisease/covid19vaccine/99493; @url:https://www.fda.gov/media/159597/download].
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For example, in the U.S.A., the FDA recently recommended bivalent booster doses designed to account for the Omicron VOC [@url:https://www.fda.gov/news-events/press-announcements/coronavirus-covid-19-update-fda-recommends-inclusion-omicron-ba45-component-covid-19-vaccine-booster; @url:https://www.medpagetoday.com/infectiousdisease/covid19vaccine/99493; @url:https://www.fda.gov/media/159597/download].
For example, in the U.S.A., the FDA recently recommended bivalent booster doses designed to account for the Omicron VOC [@url:https://www.fda.gov/news-events/press-announcements/coronavirus-covid-19-update-fda-recommends-inclusion-omicron-ba45-component-covid-19-vaccine-booster; @url:https://www.medpagetoday.com/infectiousdisease/covid19vaccine/99493; @url:https://www.fda.gov/media/159597/download].
In this case, bivalent refers to the fact that doses deliver both the original formulation and an updated vaccine designed for the Omicron subvariants circulating in summer 2022.

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I found a few problems in the build log. I'm going to edit the manual references directly. It's too complicated to do with suggestions.

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rando2 commented Sep 3, 2022

Appveyor failed, so not sure what's that's about, but I'm not seeing error messages about the references anymore in the manubot build, so I think I might have done the manual references correctly!

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I updated the manual references in ebb6f64 to remove the note field. Manubot includes a standard identifier in the note, which overrides the id if both are present.

I checked the GitHub HTML artifact and build logs quickly and they look good. These two small issues are the only ones I found.

Before merging, we can also update 90.back-matter.md to use the new arXiv reference for @individual-vaccines-traditional and delete it from manual-references.json. I can push that change directly if you'd like.

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rando2 commented Sep 3, 2022

Thanks @agitter! I just updated the back matter, manual references, and the read me as well

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agitter commented Sep 6, 2022

The GitHub Pages deployment failed. I don't understand why this timed out. The content was pushed to the gh-pages branch correctly but wasn't deployed to https://greenelab.github.io/covid19-review/

Edit: tracking in #1177

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