Update title page to reflect messaging guidelines

Changes to intro/product summary blurb made to follow Marketing messaging guidelines. Link at top no goes to product page of the foundries.io website. Note that other requested changes which involve the sidebar, header, or footer will be handled in a separate PR. QA: Ran linkcheck and viewed built HTML. This commit addresses FFTK-3449 Signed-off-by: Katrina Prosise <[email protected]>
foundriesio · Sep 4, 2024 · 80f68bc · 80f68bc
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 FoundriesFactory_ Documentation
 ===============================
 
-The FoundriesFactory™ Platform is a cloud service to build, test, deploy,
-and maintain secure, updatable IoT and Edge products. It is used to
-customize open source software projects including U-Boot, OP-TEE,
-OE/Yocto Project, the Linux microPlatform™ and Docker®.
+The FoundriesFactory™ platform is a comprehensive tool set for building, testing, deploying,
+and maintaining updatable, security focused IoT and Edge products.
+
+Combined with the :term:`Linux microPlatform` (LmP) and utilizing open source software projects including U-Boot, OP-TEE, OE/Yocto Project, and Docker®,
+The FoundriesFactory Platform brings together key features and functions for developing professional embedded devices.
 
 .. toctree::
    :maxdepth: 2
@@ -102,12 +103,4 @@ OE/Yocto Project, the Linux microPlatform™ and Docker®.
    v93 <https://github.com/foundriesio/docs/blob/main/release-notes/rn_v93.md>
    v92 <https://github.com/foundriesio/docs/blob/main/release-notes/rn_v92.md>
 
-.. ifconfig:: todo_include_todos is True
-
-   **Documentation-wide TODO List**
-   -------------------------------------------
-
-   (This only appears when ``todo_include_todos`` is True.)
-
-.. todolist::
-.. _FoundriesFactory: https://foundries.io
+.. _FoundriesFactory: https://foundries.io/products/