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2 changes: 1 addition & 1 deletion docs/annexes/annex-3/annex-3.01-pid-rulebook.md
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These OIDs SHALL be used in certificates used for PID attributes within
the ISO-compliant EUDI Wallet ecosystem, in exactly the same way as the
corresponding OIDs specified in ISO/IEC 18103-5 are used within the
mobile driving license ecosystem.
mobile driving licence ecosystem.

Notes:

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## 1 Introduction

This document is the mobile driving license (mDL) Rulebook. It contains
This document is the mobile driving licence (mDL) Rulebook. It contains
requirements specific to the mDL use case within the EUDI Wallet.

This mDL Rulebook contains the following topics:
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This document describes the structure, type, data element identifiers,
and logical organisation of the mandatory and optional attributes of the
mobile driving license (mDL) attestation within the EUDI Wallet. It also
mobile driving licence (mDL) attestation within the EUDI Wallet. It also
describes how Member States can specify any possible national
attributes.

Mobile driving licenses are legally specified in the [proposed
EC Regulation 2023_127](https://eur-lex.europa.eu/legal-content/EN/TXT/?uri=celex%3A52023PC0127) ( 4<sup>th</sup> Driving License Regulation). This
Mobile driving licences are legally specified in the [proposed
EC Regulation 2023_127](https://eur-lex.europa.eu/legal-content/EN/TXT/?uri=celex%3A52023PC0127) ( 4<sup>th</sup> Driving Licence Regulation). This
Regulation specifies that mDLs shall comply with the ISO/IEC 18013-5
standard. It does not mention any other standards, in particular not
\[SD JWT\]. Consequently, mDLs issued to a EUDI Wallet instance SHALL
\[SD JWT\]. Consequently, mDLs issued to an EUDI Wallet instance SHALL
NOT be implemented as \[SD JWT\]-compliant document. This document
therefore specifies only an ISO/IEC 18013-5 compliant encoding.

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may also rely on Qualified Electronic Attestation of Attributes
Providers. For EAAs to be used, TSPs offer Users a way to request and
obtain EAA, meaning they need to technically comply with EUDI Wallet
interfaces specifications. Depending on the domain rules, EAA providers
interfaces specifications. Depending on the domain rules, EAA Providers
may provide validity information about EAAs, without having an ability
to receive any information about the use of the EAA. The terms and
conditions of issuing EAAs and related services are subject to sectoral
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bodies, accredited by a national accreditation body designated by Member
States according to [Regulation 765/2008](https://eur-lex.europa.eu/legal-content/EN/TXT/?uri=celex:32008R0765) Article 6c (3), as responsible
for carrying out assessments on which Member States will have to rely
before issuing a EUDI Wallet or providing the qualified status to a
before issuing an EUDI Wallet or providing the qualified status to a
Trust Service Provider.

The EUDI Wallets will need to be certified by CABs. QTSPs shall be
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### 4.3 Architecture types

Building upon the high-level design described in figure 2, at least four
different types of architecture for the EUDI Wallet solution can be
different types of architecture for the EUDI Wallet Solution can be
identified, each leveraging a different type of Wallet Secure
Cryptographic Device (WSCD):

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Figure 3: State-chart of Wallet Solution

The **Candidate** state is the first state of a EUDI Wallet Solution.
The **Candidate** state is the first state of an EUDI Wallet Solution.
This means it is fully implemented and the EUDI Wallet Provider requests
the solution to be certified as an EUDI Wallet as part of an EUDI Wallet
eID scheme.
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EAA, depending on whether it is issued by a qualified trust service
provider (QTSP) or by an unqualified one. Similarly, an mDL may be
issued as a PuB-EAA, a QEAA, or a non-qualified EAA, depending on the
legal status of the party issuing mobile driving licenses in each Member
legal status of the party issuing mobile driving licences in each Member
State, in addition to being an authorised mDL Provider in accordance
with the rules applicable for mDL Providers.

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circumstances User approval to present data from their EUDI Wallet
Instance should be construed as lawful grounds for the processing of
personal data by the Relying Party or any other party. A Relying Party
requesting or processing personal data from a EUDI Wallet Instance must
requesting or processing personal data from an EUDI Wallet Instance must
ensure that it has grounds for lawful processing of that data, according
to Article 6 of the GDPR.

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- A Relying Party typically has a list of attestations that it accepts for
a certain use case. For example, a Relying Party could accept a mobile
Driving License (mDL) issued by a national driving license Provider, as
Driving Licence (mDL) issued by a national driving licence Provider, as
proof of identity. If a Relying Party decides to accept a specific type
of attestation issued by a specific Attestation Provider, the Relying
Party must accept any valid and authentic attestation issued by that
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vulnerability is identified and not remedied in a timely manner,
certification shall be cancelled.

### 7.2 Overall approach to Certification of EUDI Wallet solutions
### 7.2 Overall approach to Certification of EUDI Wallet Solutions

The certification of EUDI Wallets is of the utmost importance in
ensuring their interoperability, security, trustworthiness, and
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dedicated CSA certification scheme for the EUDI Wallets will be
established by ENISA.

#### 7.2.1 Certification of EUDI Wallet solutions in the short term
#### 7.2.1 Certification of EUDI Wallet Solutions in the short term

Until a dedicated EUDI Wallets cybersecurity certification scheme under
the CSA is available, the Regulation allows Member States to establish
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a requirement to CABs for functional testing, for example supported by
test-suites or test cases.

#### 7.2.2 Certification of EUDI Wallet solutions in the long term
#### 7.2.2 Certification of EUDI Wallet Solutions in the long term

In parallel to the work described above, ENISA is requested to draft a
dedicated European cybersecurity certification scheme for the EUDI
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| Enhancement Requests | Request new features, sections, or content to be added to the document to improve its usefulness or relevance. |
| Formatting and Styling | Feedback regarding the visual appearance, organization, and consistency of formatting within the document. |
| Documentation Standards | Discussions around adhering to documentation standards, conventions, or guidelines. |
| License and Legal Concerns | Questions or concerns related to the licensing of the document, usage rights, attribution requirements, or legal implications for contributors and users. |
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| Technical Clarification | Raise issues seeking clarification on specific technical content within the document. |

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