[ML] Changes Machine learning overview UI text (#64625)

Co-Authored-By: Lisa Cawley <[email protected]>
elastic · Apr 29, 2020 · a38c11c · a38c11c
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diff --git a/x-pack/plugins/ml/public/application/overview/components/analytics_panel/analytics_panel.tsx b/x-pack/plugins/ml/public/application/overview/components/analytics_panel/analytics_panel.tsx
@@ -82,14 +82,14 @@ export const AnalyticsPanel: FC<Props> = ({ jobCreationDisabled }) => {
           title={
             <h2>
               {i18n.translate('xpack.ml.overview.analyticsList.createFirstJobMessage', {
-                defaultMessage: 'Create your first analytics job',
+                defaultMessage: 'Create your first data frame analytics job',
               })}
             </h2>
           }
           body={
             <p>
               {i18n.translate('xpack.ml.overview.analyticsList.emptyPromptText', {
-                defaultMessage: `Data frame analytics enable you to perform different analyses of your data and annotate it with the results. The analytics job stores the annotated data, as well as a copy of the source data, in a new index.`,
+                defaultMessage: `Data frame analytics enable you to perform different analyses of your data and annotates it with the results. The job puts the annotated data and a copy of the source data in a new index.`,
               })}
             </p>
           }

diff --git a/...ublic/application/overview/components/anomaly_detection_panel/anomaly_detection_panel.tsx b/...ublic/application/overview/components/anomaly_detection_panel/anomaly_detection_panel.tsx
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ export const AnomalyDetectionPanel: FC<Props> = ({ jobCreationDisabled }) => {
             <Fragment>
               <p>
                 {i18n.translate('xpack.ml.overview.anomalyDetection.emptyPromptText', {
-                  defaultMessage: `Machine learning makes it easy to detect anomalies in time series data stored in Elasticsearch. Track one metric from a single machine or hundreds of metrics across thousands of machines. Start automatically spotting the anomalies hiding in your data and resolve issues faster.`,
+                  defaultMessage: `Anomaly detection enables you to find unusual behavior in time series data. Start automatically spotting the anomalies hiding in your data and resolve issues faster.`,
                 })}
               </p>
             </Fragment>

diff --git a/x-pack/plugins/ml/public/application/overview/components/sidebar.tsx b/x-pack/plugins/ml/public/application/overview/components/sidebar.tsx
@@ -11,7 +11,6 @@ import { useMlKibana } from '../../contexts/kibana';
 
 const createJobLink = '#/jobs/new_job/step/index_or_search';
 const feedbackLink = 'https://www.elastic.co/community/';
-const whatIsMachineLearningLink = 'https://www.elastic.co/what-is/elasticsearch-machine-learning';
 
 interface Props {
   createAnomalyDetectionJobDisabled: boolean;
@@ -60,7 +59,7 @@ export const OverviewSideBar: FC<Props> = ({ createAnomalyDetectionJobDisabled }
         <p>
           <FormattedMessage
             id="xpack.ml.overview.gettingStartedSectionText"
-            defaultMessage="Welcome to Machine Learning. Get started by reviewing our {docs} or {createJob}. For more information about machine learning in the Elastic stack please see {whatIsMachineLearning}. We recommend using {transforms} to create feature indices for analytics jobs."
+            defaultMessage="Welcome to Machine Learning. Get started by reviewing our {docs} or {createJob}. We recommend using {transforms} to create feature indices for analytics jobs."
             values={{
               docs: (
                 <EuiLink href={docsLink} target="blank">
@@ -79,14 +78,6 @@ export const OverviewSideBar: FC<Props> = ({ createAnomalyDetectionJobDisabled }
                   />
                 </EuiLink>
               ),
-              whatIsMachineLearning: (
-                <EuiLink href={whatIsMachineLearningLink} target="blank">
-                  <FormattedMessage
-                    id="xpack.ml.overview.gettingStartedSectionWhatIsMachineLearning"
-                    defaultMessage="here"
-                  />
-                </EuiLink>
-              ),
             }}
           />
         </p>
@@ -96,7 +87,7 @@ export const OverviewSideBar: FC<Props> = ({ createAnomalyDetectionJobDisabled }
         <p>
           <FormattedMessage
             id="xpack.ml.overview.feedbackSectionText"
-            defaultMessage="If you have input or suggestions regarding your experience with Machine Learning please feel free to submit {feedbackLink}."
+            defaultMessage="If you have input or suggestions regarding your experience, please submit {feedbackLink}."
             values={{
               feedbackLink: (
                 <EuiLink href={feedbackLink} target="blank">

diff --git a/x-pack/plugins/translations/translations/ja-JP.json b/x-pack/plugins/translations/translations/ja-JP.json
@@ -10505,10 +10505,9 @@
     "xpack.ml.overview.feedbackSectionTitle": "フィードバック",
     "xpack.ml.overview.gettingStartedSectionCreateJob": "新規ジョブを作成中",
     "xpack.ml.overview.gettingStartedSectionDocs": "ドキュメンテーション",
-    "xpack.ml.overview.gettingStartedSectionText": "機械学習へようこそ。はじめに{docs}や{createJob}をご参照ください。Elastic Stackの機械学習の詳細については、{whatIsMachineLearning}をご覧ください。{transforms}を使用して、分析ジョブの機能インデックスを作成することをお勧めします。",
+    "xpack.ml.overview.gettingStartedSectionText": "機械学習へようこそ。はじめに{docs}や{createJob}をご参照ください。{transforms}を使用して、分析ジョブの機能インデックスを作成することをお勧めします。",
     "xpack.ml.overview.gettingStartedSectionTitle": "はじめて使う",
     "xpack.ml.overview.gettingStartedSectionTransforms": "Elasticsearchの変換",
-    "xpack.ml.overview.gettingStartedSectionWhatIsMachineLearning": "こちら",
     "xpack.ml.overview.overviewLabel": "概要",
     "xpack.ml.overview.statsBar.failedAnalyticsLabel": "失敗",
     "xpack.ml.overview.statsBar.runningAnalyticsLabel": "実行中",

diff --git a/x-pack/plugins/translations/translations/zh-CN.json b/x-pack/plugins/translations/translations/zh-CN.json
@@ -10508,10 +10508,9 @@
     "xpack.ml.overview.feedbackSectionTitle": "反馈",
     "xpack.ml.overview.gettingStartedSectionCreateJob": "创建新作业",
     "xpack.ml.overview.gettingStartedSectionDocs": "文档",
-    "xpack.ml.overview.gettingStartedSectionText": "欢迎使用 Machine Learning。首先阅读我们的{docs}或{createJob}。有关 Elastic Stack 中的机器学习的详情，请参阅{whatIsMachineLearning}。建议使用 {transforms}为分析作业创建功能索引。",
+    "xpack.ml.overview.gettingStartedSectionText": "欢迎使用 Machine Learning。首先阅读我们的{docs}或{createJob}。建议使用 {transforms}为分析作业创建功能索引。",
     "xpack.ml.overview.gettingStartedSectionTitle": "入门",
     "xpack.ml.overview.gettingStartedSectionTransforms": "Elasticsearch 的转换",
-    "xpack.ml.overview.gettingStartedSectionWhatIsMachineLearning": "此处",
     "xpack.ml.overview.overviewLabel": "概览",
     "xpack.ml.overview.statsBar.failedAnalyticsLabel": "失败",
     "xpack.ml.overview.statsBar.runningAnalyticsLabel": "正在运行",