DBZ-8256 Address review comments

_posts/2024-09-20-Detect-data-mutation-patterns-with-Debezium.adoc

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 == The concept and the idea behind
-In recent years, observability has become an essential part of modern systems due to a grown complexity, this especially in distributed architectures like microservices, containerized applications, and cloud environments.
+In recent years, observability has become an essential part of modern systems due to the increasing complexity of architectures like microservices, containerized applications, and cloud environments.
 
 Here are some important reasons why observability is crucial today:
 
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 Suppose we have an order service that processes and stores orders made by our customers.
 An important business metric to monitor would be the number of orders made.
-This number is very relevant to the business because it directly correlates to the company’s earnings..
+This number is very relevant to the business because it directly correlates to the company’s earnings.
 A relevant drop in number of orders should alert the team responsible for that service as soon as possible.
 
 Normally, we would need a https://prometheus.io/docs/concepts/metric_types/#counter[counter] metric that increments every time an order is correctly placed and stored in the database.
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 Open a web browser and go to the Grafana UI at http://localhost:3000[http://localhost:3000].
 Login into the console as user `admin` with password `admin`.
-When asked either change the password (you also can skip this step).
+When asked either change the password or skip this step.
 
 Then, to monitor the order service activity, we have created the `General/ Microservices activity monitoring` dashboard.