stbof feedback; added remote diagram includes

cockroachdb · Nov 9, 2021 · 853820c · 853820c
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diff --git a/v21.2/alter-default-privileges.md b/v21.2/alter-default-privileges.md
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ For an example, see [Grant default privileges to a specific role](#grant-default
 ## Synopsis
 
 <div>
-{% include {{ page.version.version }}/sql/generated/diagrams/alter_default_privileges.html %}
+{% remote_include https://raw.githubusercontent.com/cockroachdb/generated-diagrams/release-21.2/grammar_svg/alter_default_privileges.html %}
 </div>
 
 ### Parameters
@@ -276,7 +276,7 @@ SQLSTATE: 42501
 
 `cockroachlabs` created the `tracks` table after revoking default `SELECT` privileges from `max`. As a result, `max` never had `SELECT` privileges on `tracks`.
 
-Note that, because `max` has no default privileges, the user can now be dropped:
+Because `max` has no default privileges, the user can now be dropped:
 
 {% include copy-clipboard.html %}
 ~~~ sql

diff --git a/v21.2/authorization.md b/v21.2/authorization.md
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ To view the default privileges for a role, or for a set of roles, use the [`SHOW
 
 To change the default privileges on objects that a user creates, use the [`ALTER DEFAULT PRIVILEGES`](alter-default-privileges.html) statement.
 
-Note that the creator of an object is also the object's [owner](authorization.html#object-ownership). Any roles that are members of the owner role have `ALL` privileges on the object, independent of the default privileges. Altering the default privileges of objects created by a role does not affect that role's privileges as the object's owner. The default privileges granted to other users/roles are always in addition to the ownership (i.e., `ALL`) privileges given to the creator of the object.
+The creator of an object is also the object's [owner](authorization.html#object-ownership). Any roles that are members of the owner role have `ALL` privileges on the object, independent of the default privileges. Altering the default privileges of objects created by a role does not affect that role's privileges as the object's owner. The default privileges granted to other users/roles are always in addition to the ownership (i.e., `ALL`) privileges given to the creator of the object.
 
 For more examples of default privileges, see the examples on the [`SHOW DEFAULT PRIVILEGES`](show-default-privileges.html#examples) and [`ALTER DEFAULT PRIVILEGES`](alter-default-privileges.html#examples) statement pages.
 

diff --git a/v21.2/show-default-privileges.md b/v21.2/show-default-privileges.md
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ toc: true
 ## Synopsis
 
 <div>
-{% include {{ page.version.version }}/sql/generated/diagrams/show_default_privileges.html %}
+{% remote_include https://raw.githubusercontent.com/cockroachdb/generated-diagrams/release-21.2/grammar_svg/show_default_privileges.html %}
 </div>
 
 ## Parameters