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manangouhari committed Mar 16, 2021
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title: Basics of SmartPy
img: ../../../src/images/bot2.png
description: |
Put your new-found blockchain knowledge to use and learn how write your first smart contract, yippee!
Put your new-found blockchain knowledge to use and learn how to write your first smart contract, yippee!
<br />
You’ll build your own Cryptobot which can shoot bullets and fight aliens 🤖🔥
You’ll build your Cryptobot which can shoot bullets and fight aliens 🤖🔥
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👽 The alien invasion is here! 👽
At the starting of your journey, the school bestows upon you a
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Your mission is to build and assemble the cryptobot from scratch
and then use use the gem to power your cryptobot to battle the
and then use the gem to power your cryptobot to battle the
incoming alien invasion!
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title: Inter-contract calling
img: ../../../src/images/bot3.png
description: |
A new threat is incoming, a dangerous and viscious wave of aliens.
A new threat is incoming, a dangerous and vicious wave of aliens.
<br />
Your Cryptobot is not equipped to fight this alone.
<br />
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title: FA2 Tokens
img: ../../../src/images/bot4.png
description: |
Create your own civilization - currency, workforce and all! <br />
In this module you’ll learn so much about tokens, different types of tokens, how to create your own and so much more. 💵⚙️
Create your own civilization - currency, workforce, and all! <br />
In this module, you’ll learn so much about tokens, different types of tokens, how to create your own and so much more. 💵⚙️
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The aliens have been blown to smithereens.

You did it young warrior, with your technical prowess you've managed to save this world of grave danger.
You did it, young warrior, with the technical prowess you've managed to save this world of grave danger.

But, the war has left the current world in shatters.
No system, no society, no government in place. All is gone.

The responsibility is yours to give the new-world a structure and build a society of your own!
A new society, where tokens running on blockchain are the de-facto currency and Cryptobots are the labor reserve.
A new society, where tokens running on the blockchain are the de-facto currency and Cryptobots are the labor reserve.

In this lesson, let's make our own tokens!
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javascript library.
</p>
<p className={`mt-4`}>
You’ll build your own Cryptobot, fight aliens, create your own
currency, and so much more exciting stuff ✨
You’ll build your Cryptobot, fight aliens, create your currency,
and so much more exciting stuff ✨
</p>
<p className={`mt-2`}>
I know, it can sound like too much. But don't worry, we'll take
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</p>
<p className={`mt-2`}>
We've got you covered with our fun and free course, which will
take you from a noob to blockchain pro in matter of a few hours
🥳
take you from a noob to blockchain pro in a quick few hours 🥳
</p>
<p>
You'll build your own Cryptobot and then an army of them to
fight in the Cryptoverse Wars ⚔️
You'll build your Cryptobot and then an army of them to fight in
the Cryptoverse Wars ⚔️
</p>
</div>
<div className="flex justify-center">
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</li>
<li>
You can’t transfer money from one continent to another
without the hassle of high bank fee
without the hassle of a high bank fee
</li>
<li>
You can’t invest in companies without giving away all your
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blockchain 🦄
</p>
<p>
So much in finance is getting built on top of blockchain 💰
So much in finance is getting built on top of the blockchain
💰
</p>
<p>
Just in 2020 alone, Crypto’s market has grown by a frickin’
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</h1>
</div>
<FeatureGrid
heading="Create your own currency!"
heading="Create your currency!"
subtext={`
<p>
Learn how to create apps on the Tezos blockchain through our exciting course.
</p>
<p>You even learn how to make your own currency 🤑</p>
<p>You even learn how to make your currency 🤑</p>
`}
buttontext="Become a Blockchain Pro "
video={createCurrency}
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