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README.md and part1-2.md (en): Fixed errors and language improvements #211

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@HA3IK HA3IK commented Sep 16, 2020

Hello,

This is fixes for the en/README.md and en/part1-2.md files:

  • Incorrect paragraph references;
  • Words errors;
  • Redundant syntax elements; and
  • Language improvements

@HA3IK HA3IK changed the title README.md and part1.md (en): Fixed errors and language improvements README.md and part1-2.md (en): Fixed errors and language improvements Sep 23, 2020
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# 2. HTTP today

HTTP 1.1 has turned into a protocol used for virtually everything on the Internet. Huge investments have been made in protocols and infrastructure that take advantage of this, to the extent that it is often easier today to make things run on top of HTTP rather than building something new on its own.
HTTP 1.1 has turned into a protocol used for virtually everything on the Internet. Huge investments have been made in protocols and infrastructure that takes advantage of this, to the extent that it is often easier today to make things run on top of HTTP rather than building something new on its own.
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IF "infrastructure" THEN takes

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## 2.4 Transfer sizes and number of objects

When looking at the trend for some of the most popular sites on the web today and what it takes to download their front pages, a clear pattern emerges. Over the years, the amount of data that needs to be retrieved has gradually risen up to and above 1.9MB. What is more important in this context is that, on average, over 100 individual resources are required to display each page.
When looking at the trend for some of the most popular sites on the web today and what it takes to download their front pages, a clear pattern emerges. Over the years, the amount of data that needs to be retrieved has gradually risen up to and above 1.9 MB. What is more important in this context is that, on average, over 100 individual resources are required to display each page.
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Here is specified "1.9 MB", but on transfer size growth graph indicated 2.1 MB.
It's ok?

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