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Beforeinstallprompt (attempt 2) #12

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Apologies for closing the old issue, I can't figure out how to hook this back up to that one. Restarting, and now without a mountain of commits.

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Couple of small fixes + drive-by comments... note, you shouldn't need any data-link-for= when linking to IDL things.

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if the document is not <a data-cite=
"appmanifest#dfn-is-installable">installable</a>.
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Maybe

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if the document is not <a data-cite=
"appmanifest#dfn-is-installable">installable</a>.
if the document is not [=installed web application|installable=].

Note that "is installable" is gone from the other spec... maybe it should be resurrected here?

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github: "WICG/manifest-incubations",
shortName: "manifest-incubations",
xref: {
specs: ["appmanifest"],
specs: ["appmanifest", "dom"],
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Note, if you data-cite="DOM" below, you don't need it here. Up to you which way you use it.

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dmurph and others added 10 commits July 14, 2021 14:24
Co-authored-by: Marcos Cáceres <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Marcos Cáceres <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Marcos Cáceres <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Marcos Cáceres <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Marcos Cáceres <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Marcos Cáceres <[email protected]>
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<li>Wait until the {{Document}} of the <a>top-level browsing
context</a> is <a data-cite="html#completely-loaded">completely
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"Completely loaded" is not a exported term from HTML, which probably means it's not the right thing to link to?

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<li>If there is already an <a data-lt=
"present an install prompt">install prompt being presented</a> or if
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<li>If there is already an <a data-lt=
"present an install prompt">install prompt being presented</a> or if
<li>If there is already an <a>install prompt being presented</a> or if

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This is linked from a couple sections - how should I resolve links to "present an install prompt"?

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dmurph and others added 7 commits July 15, 2021 09:47
Co-authored-by: Marcos Cáceres <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Marcos Cáceres <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Marcos Cáceres <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Marcos Cáceres <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Marcos Cáceres <[email protected]>
@dmurph dmurph closed this in #18 Jul 16, 2021
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