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Rephrase/reformat a few sentences #1981

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Description

Make sentences simpler:

How to get deal with various problems in your Selenium code

with

How to solve various problems in your Selenium code

Replace

How to get manage WebDriver problems

with

How to solve WebDriver problems

Replace

WebDriver drives a browser natively ..., marks a leaps forward

with

WebDriver drives a browser natively .... It marks a leaps forward

Remove unnecessary space

Replace

the images are displayed in the same place ,

with

the images are displayed in the same place,

Motivation and Context

Improve flow of sentences on website

Types of changes

  • Change to the site (I have double-checked the Netlify deployment, and my changes look good)
  • Code example added (and I also added the example to all translated languages)
  • Improved translation
  • Added new translation (and I also added a notice to each document missing translation)

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  • I have read the contributing document.
  • I have used hugo to render the site/docs locally and I am sure it works.

PR Type

documentation


Description

  • Improved the clarity and readability of various documentation pages by rephrasing sentences.
  • Corrected punctuation errors, such as removing unnecessary spaces and separating run-on sentences.
  • Simplified descriptions in multiple languages, including English, Japanese, and Portuguese.

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Documentation
details.en.md
Remove unnecessary space and improve sentence flow             

website_and_docs/content/documentation/overview/details.en.md

  • Removed unnecessary space before a comma in a sentence.
  • Improved sentence flow by correcting punctuation.
  • +2/-2     
    _index.en.md
    Correct run-on sentence in WebDriver description                 

    website_and_docs/content/documentation/webdriver/_index.en.md

  • Separated a run-on sentence into two distinct sentences.
  • Improved readability by adding a period.
  • +2/-2     
    _index.en.md
    Simplify WebDriver troubleshooting description                     

    website_and_docs/content/documentation/webdriver/troubleshooting/_index.en.md

  • Simplified description by rephrasing.
  • Improved clarity of WebDriver troubleshooting description.
  • +1/-1     
    _index.ja.md
    Simplify WebDriver troubleshooting description in Japanese

    website_and_docs/content/documentation/webdriver/troubleshooting/_index.ja.md

  • Simplified description by rephrasing.
  • Improved clarity of WebDriver troubleshooting description.
  • +1/-1     
    _index.pt-br.md
    Simplify WebDriver troubleshooting description in Portuguese

    website_and_docs/content/documentation/webdriver/troubleshooting/_index.pt-br.md

  • Simplified description by rephrasing.
  • Improved clarity of WebDriver troubleshooting description.
  • +1/-1     
    _index.en.md
    Clarify description in error understanding section             

    website_and_docs/content/documentation/webdriver/troubleshooting/errors/_index.en.md

  • Rephrased description for clarity.
  • Simplified language in error understanding section.
  • +1/-1     
    _index.ja.md
    Clarify description in error understanding section in Japanese

    website_and_docs/content/documentation/webdriver/troubleshooting/errors/_index.ja.md

  • Rephrased description for clarity.
  • Simplified language in error understanding section.
  • +1/-1     
    _index.pt-br.md
    Clarify description in error understanding section in Portuguese

    website_and_docs/content/documentation/webdriver/troubleshooting/errors/_index.pt-br.md

  • Rephrased description for clarity.
  • Simplified language in error understanding section.
  • +1/-1     

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    Replace
    ```
    How to get deal with various problems in your Selenium code
    ```
    with
    ```
    How to solve various problems in your Selenium code
    ```
    
    to make simpler the description.
    Replace
    ```
    How to get manage WebDriver problems
    ```
    with
    ```
    How to solve WebDriver problems
    ```
    
    to make simpler the description.
    Replace
    ```
    WebDriver drives a browser natively ..., marks a leaps forward
    ```
    with
    ```
    WebDriver drives a browser natively .... It marks a leaps forward
    ```
    
    I claim the version before the change is a 'run-on sentence', i.e.
    two separate sentences that are connected improperly (see
    https://academicguides.waldenu.edu/writingcenter/grammar/runonsentences).
    
    This commit changes how those two sentences are connected; in
    particular, it separates the sentences with a period and provides a
    subject for the second sentence.
    The page https://www.selenium.dev/documentation/overview/details/
    includes
    ```
    the images are displayed in the same place ,
    ```
    
    I intend this commit removes the space between 'place' and ','.
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    Minor Formatting
    Removed unnecessary space before comma and improved sentence structure

    Sentence Structure
    Split a run-on sentence into two separate sentences for better readability

    Description Update
    Simplified the description of how to manage WebDriver problems

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    Enhancement
    Expand description to provide more context about WebDriver troubleshooting

    Consider expanding the description to provide more context about the types of
    WebDriver problems that can be solved. This can give readers a better idea of what
    to expect from the content.

    website_and_docs/content/documentation/webdriver/troubleshooting/_index.en.md [6]

    -+  How to solve WebDriver problems.
    ++  How to identify and solve common WebDriver issues, including browser compatibility, element location, and timing problems.
    • Apply this suggestion
    Suggestion importance[1-10]: 7

    Why: Expanding the description to include specific types of WebDriver problems provides valuable context, helping readers understand the scope of the content better. This enhances the document's usefulness.

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    Provide more specific information about the types of problems addressed

    Consider rephrasing the description to be more specific about the types of problems
    that will be addressed. This can help set clearer expectations for the reader.

    website_and_docs/content/documentation/webdriver/troubleshooting/errors/_index.en.md [6]

    -+  How to solve various problems in your Selenium code.
    ++  How to diagnose and resolve common errors and exceptions in your Selenium WebDriver code.
    • Apply this suggestion
    Suggestion importance[1-10]: 6

    Why: The suggestion to specify the types of problems addressed adds clarity and sets clearer expectations for readers. This improves the document's precision and relevance.

    6
    Improve sentence flow with a transitional phrase

    Consider adding a transitional phrase to improve the flow between the two sentences.
    This can help to connect the ideas more smoothly.

    website_and_docs/content/documentation/webdriver/_index.en.md [12-13]

    -+or on a remote machine using the Selenium server.
    -+It marks a leap forward in terms of browser automation.
    +or on a remote machine using the Selenium server.
    +This capability marks a leap forward in terms of browser automation.
    • Apply this suggestion
    Suggestion importance[1-10]: 5

    Why: Adding a transitional phrase could enhance the flow between sentences, making the connection between ideas smoother. This suggestion improves readability and coherence.

    5
    Improve sentence structure for clarity and emphasis

    Consider using a colon instead of a comma to introduce the list of similarities.
    This can make the structure of the sentence clearer and more emphatic.

    website_and_docs/content/documentation/overview/details.en.md [42-44]

     Even though the text is rendered in the same fonts,
    -+the images are displayed in the same place,
    -+and the links take you to the same destination.
    +the images are displayed in the same place,
    +and the links take you to the same destination:
    • Apply this suggestion
    Suggestion importance[1-10]: 3

    Why: The suggestion to use a colon instead of a comma could improve clarity and emphasis, but it is not a necessary change. The current structure is already clear, and the improvement is marginal.

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    On page https://www.selenium.dev/documentation/webdriver/drivers/
    in section 'Quitting Sessions', the Java code example shows text:
    
    ```
    {< gh-codeblock path="examples/java/src/test/java/dev/selenium/getting_started/FirstScript.java#L29" >}
    ```
    
    Instead of this, we want to show the code from that file.
    This commit adds an extra layer of `{}` in order to show the code.
    The panels for other languages that work (i.e. Python, Ruby) have
    this extra layer of `{}`.
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    zipperer commented Oct 6, 2024

    Commit c4249e0 addresses code blocks that look like:
    20241006-selenium-website-reformat-codeblock-to-show-code-rather-than-reference

    That is, the commit edits the codeblocks to show code rather than a reference to the location of the code.

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    Thank you for the contribution @zipperer !

    @harsha1502, these changes look good to me.

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