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blog/2023-05-31-may-releases.md

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-May releases are here! 🎉 Both conda 23.5.0 and conda-build 3.25.0 are now available on both main and conda-forge:
+May releases are here! 🎊 Conda 23.5.0, conda-build 3.25.0, and conda-libmamba-solver 23.5.0 are now available on both main and conda-forge:
 
 ## [Changes in Conda](https://github.com/conda/conda/releases/tag/23.5.0)
 
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ Additionally, the following features and changes can be found in conda 23.5.0:
 * The index cache metadata file `.state.json` was renamed to `.info.json` to track [draft Repodata Metadata `.info.json` CEP](https://github.com/conda-incubator/ceps/pull/48).
 * Improved cache locking and logging when using `jlap`.
 * The project's README example has changed from IPython Notebook and NumPy to PyTorch.
-* Retry language in flexible solve and `repodata` logs are now less ominous.
+* Retry language in flexible solve and `repodata` logs are now more user friendly.
 * Python 3.11 is now supported.
 
 
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ The following bug fixes were implemented in the 23.5.0 version of conda:
 * The default value for `defaults` includes `msys2` when `context.subdir` is `win-*` on non-Windows platforms.
 * `TypeError`s are avoided when non-string types are written to the index cache metadata.
 * `conda.core.package_cache_data.UrlsData.get_url` no longer fails when `package_path` has a `.conda` extension.
-* No more pre-converting of paths to Unix style on Windows in `conda.sh`; this is so that they are prefix-replaceable upon installation.
+* No more pre-converting of paths to Unix style on Windows in `conda.sh`; this done to make them prefix-replaceable upon installation.
 
 
 ### 🌅 What's Marked for [Deprecation](https://github.com/conda-incubator/ceps/blob/main/cep-9.md)? 🌅
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 ### ✨ What's New? ✨
 
-In the latest version of conda-build, noarch packages that use virtual packages can now have them added to the hash contents of the package. This facilitates the building of noarch packages multiple times for different platforms with platform-specific dependencies. In conda-build 3.25.0, different variants can be built for `__linux`/`__osx`/`__win` and get non-clashing package file names.
+In the latest version of conda-build, noarch packages that use virtual packages can now be added to the hash contents of a package. This facilitates the building of noarch packages multiple times for different platforms with platform-specific dependencies. In conda-build 3.25.0, different variants can be built for `__linux`, `__osx`,  or `__win` and get non-clashing package file names.
 
 Additionally, the following features and changes can be found in conda-build 3.25.0:
 
-* Support for `svn` source credentials (`svn_username` and `svn_password`).
+* Support for [`svn` source credentials](https://docs.conda.io/projects/conda-build/en/3.25.x/resources/define-metadata.html#source-from-svn) (`svn_username` and `svn_password`).
 * Standalone `conda-index` is now utilized instead of bundled indexing code.
 * For our build system, we switched from `setup.py` to `pyproject.toml` and use [Hatchling](https://pypi.org/project/hatchling/).
 * Minor code simplification for `conda_build.index.ChannelIndex._ensuredirs`.