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 # Summary
 
-Tomographic imaging methods allow to visualize the interior of the human body in a
-non-invasive way. Most prominent examples used for medical diagnosis are the
+Tomographic imaging methods allow visualizing the interior of the human body in a
+non-invasive way. The most prominent examples used for medical diagnosis are 
 computed tomography (CT) and magnetic resonance imaging (MRI).
-In 2015 [@Gleich2005], Bernhard Gleich and Jürgen Weizenecker introduced a new tomographic
-imaging method named Magnetic Particle Imaging (MPI) that allows to image
+In 2015, Bernhard Gleich and Jürgen Weizenecker [@Gleich2005] introduced a new tomographic
+imaging method named Magnetic Particle Imaging (MPI) that allows imaging
 the 3D distribution of magnetic nanoparticles (MNP) in realtime [@knopp2012magnetic; @knopp2017magnetic].
-The MNP can be injected intravenously and allow to image the vessel tree as well
-as organ perfusion [@graser2019human]. The MNPs are harmless for the human body and are degraded in the
+The MNPs can be injected intravenously and allow imaging the vessel tree as well
+as organ perfusion [@graser2019human]. The MNPs are harmless to the human body and are degraded in the
 liver.
 
-When working with an MPI scanner different datasets are involved. In addition to the raw data, which consist of the induced voltage signals, a calibration dataset is required to reconstruct the particle concentration. The latter describes the physical relationship between the particle concentration and the measurement signal and is usually recorded in MPI with a delta-shaped point sample.
+When working with an MPI scanner, different datasets are involved. In addition to the raw data, consisting of the induced voltage signals, a calibration dataset is required to reconstruct the particle concentration. The latter describes the physical relationship between the particle concentration and the measurement signal and is usually recorded in MPI with a delta-shaped point sample.
 The software package ``MPIFiles.jl`` provides an interface to all these data types. Besides the proprietary data format recorded with MPI scanners from Bruker, ``MPIFiles.jl`` implements the vendor-independent Magnetic Particle Imaging
-Data Format (MDF)[@knopp2016MDF], which is based on HDF5 and was developed with the aim to standardize data storage in MPI. Each data format implements a common interface and enables the user to write generic code for different file types. Besides the read and write capability for different data formats, ``MPIFiles.jl`` also offers the possibility of converting different data formats into each other.
+Data Format (MDF)[@knopp2016MDF], which is based on HDF5 and was developed with the aim of standardizing data storage in MPI. Each data format implements a common interface and enables the user to write generic code for different file types. In addition to the read and write capability for different data formats, ``MPIFiles.jl`` also offers the possibility of converting between different data formats.
 
 ``MPIFiles.jl`` supports the following types of MPI data
 
 * measurements
-* calibration data, i.e. system matrices
+* calibration data, i.e., system matrices
 * reconstruction results
 
-In addition to a low level access to the data, the package also features
-high level routines providing various post-processing methods such as
+In addition to low-level access to the data, the package also features
+high-level routines providing various post-processing methods such as
 frequency filtering, spectral leakage correction, block-averaging, and
 transfer function correction.
 
 The API of ``MPIFiles.jl`` is based on the parameter names of the MDF specification, so that the latter can be used as a reference for the description of parameters and their dimensionality.
-``MPIFiles.jl`` is licensed under the MIT license and hosted on Github at
-https://github.com/MagneticParticleImaging/MPIFiles.jl.
+``MPIFiles.jl`` is licensed under the MIT license.
 
 # References