Merge pull request #140 from nicole-numfocus/patch-1

NF edits to privacy.md

pages/privacy.md

@@ -6,17 +6,12 @@ title: Privacy Policy
 MDAnalysis is a [fiscally sponsored
 project]({{site.numfocus.sponsored_project}}) of [NumFOCUS][], a nonprofit
 dedicated to supporting the open source scientific computing
-community. Like NumFOCUS, we value the privacy of our users.
-
-
-## NumFOCUS Privacy Policy
-
-**All MDAnalysis websites are legally governed by the [NumFOCUS
-Privacy Policy][]**, which can be found at
+community. Like NumFOCUS, we value the privacy of our users. **We comply 
+with the [NumFOCUS Privacy Policy][]**, which can be found at
 [https://numfocus.org/privacy-policy](https://numfocus.org/privacy-policy).
 
-The sections below explain how MDAnalysis processes and collects data,
-which differs from sites of the NumFOCUS organization.
+The sections below explain additional processes and data collection 
+policies specific to MDAnalysis. 
 
 
 ## What information does MDAnalysis collect?
@@ -28,10 +23,10 @@ policy][]. These statistics are publicly visible at
 You can *disable statistics collection* by blocking the JavaScript
 coming from *gc.zgo.at*.
 
-*Online payments* (donations) are processed through NumFOCUS; as soon
-as you follow a "donate" button or link on a MDAnalysis website, you
-will be transferred to a NumFOCUS site. Please see the [NumFOCUS
-Privacy Policy][] regarding data collected during payment processing.
+*Online payments* (donations) are processed through NumFOCUS; upon clicking 
+on a "donate" button or link, you will be transferred to a NumFOCUS site. 
+Please see the [NumFOCUS Privacy Policy][] regarding data collected during 
+payment processing.
 
 
 ## Who will your information be shared with?
@@ -60,9 +55,6 @@ We only share information with the following third parties:
   as GitHub Pages; please see GitHub's privacy policy
   [https://help.github.com/en/github/site-policy/github-privacy-statement#additional-services](https://help.github.com/en/github/site-policy/github-privacy-statement#additional-services)
   regarding accessing GitHub Pages.
-* Payment processing: all payment processing is completely handled by
-  [NumFOCUS][] and their partners, as described in their privacy policy
-  [https://numfocus.org/privacy-policy](https://numfocus.org/privacy-policy).