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responses.md

@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ If your controller route requires parameters, you may pass them as the second ar
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 ### Redirecting To External Domains
 
-Sometimes you may need to redirect the user to a different domain than that of your application. You may do so by calling the `away` method, which creates a `RedirectResponse` without any additional URL checks or generations.
+Sometimes you may need to redirect to a domain outside of your application. You may do so by calling the `away` method, which creates a `RedirectResponse` without any additional URL encoding, validation, or verification:
 
     return redirect()->away('https://www.google.com');