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 ## Requirements
 
-When users interact with contracts they will generate and publish encrypted notes for other network participants. In order for a user to consume notes that belong to them, they need to identify, retrieve and decrypt them. A simple, privacy-preserving approach to this would be to download all of the notes and attempt to decrypt them. However, the total number of encrypted notes published by the network will be substantial, making it infeasible for some users to do this. Those users will want to utilize a note discovery protocol to privately identify their notes.
+When users interact with contracts they will generate and publish encrypted notes for other network participants. In order for a user to consume notes that belong to them, they need to identify, retrieve and decrypt them. A simple, privacy-preserving approach to this would be to download all of the notes and attempt decryption. However, the total number of encrypted notes published by the network will be substantial, making it infeasible for some users to do this. Those users will want to utilize a note discovery protocol to privately identify their notes.
 
 A number of techniques currently exist to help with this and it is a field into which a lot of research is being conducted. Therefore, our approach is not to dictate or enshrine a specific note discovery mechanism but to put in place the necessary abstractions such that users can freely choose. Additionally, through this approach we allow for integration of new or improved protocols in the future.
 

diff --git a/yellow-paper/docs/private-message-delivery/private-message-delivery.md b/yellow-paper/docs/private-message-delivery/private-message-delivery.md
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 ## User Handshaking
 
-One function that is useful regardless of a user's preferred note discovery and encryption scheme is for users to be notified when they have been sent a note from another user for the first time. To facilitate this we will deploy a 'handshaking' contract that can be used to create a private note for a recipient containing the sender's information (e.g. public key). The notes generated by this contract will be easy to identify enabling users to retrieve these notes, decrypt them and use the contents in any deterministic tag generation used by their chosen note discovery protocol. Trial decryption of these notes alone should not put too much of a burden on end users.
+One function that is useful regardless of a user's preferred note discovery and encryption scheme is for users to be notified when they have been sent a note from another user for the first time. To facilitate this we will deploy a 'handshaking' contract that can be used to create a private note for a recipient containing the sender's information (e.g. public key). The notes generated by this contract will be easy to identify enabling users to retrieve these notes, decrypt them and use the contents in any deterministic tag generation used by their chosen note discovery protocol. Trial decryption of these notes alone should not put too high a burden on end users.
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		## User Handshaking

		One function that is useful regardless of a user's preferred note discovery and encryption scheme is for users to be notified when they have been sent a note from another user for the first time. To facilitate this we will deploy a 'handshaking' contract that can be used to create a private note for a recipient containing the sender's information (e.g. public key). The notes generated by this contract will be easy to identify enabling users to retrieve these notes, decrypt them and use the contents in any deterministic tag generation used by their chosen note discovery protocol. Trial decryption of these notes alone should not put too much of a burden on end users.
		One function that is useful regardless of a user's preferred note discovery and encryption scheme is for users to be notified when they have been sent a note from another user for the first time. To facilitate this we will deploy a 'handshaking' contract that can be used to create a private note for a recipient containing the sender's information (e.g. public key). The notes generated by this contract will be easy to identify enabling users to retrieve these notes, decrypt them and use the contents in any deterministic tag generation used by their chosen note discovery protocol. Trial decryption of these notes alone should not put too high a burden on end users.