Avoid first-person speech aspects

deploy.sh

@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 
 # Note that this does not use pipefail
 # because if the grep later doesn't match any deleted files,
-# which is likely the majority case,
-# it does not exit with a 0, and I only care about the final exit.
+# which is likely to be the case the majority of the time,
+# it does not exit with 0, as we're interested in the final exit.
 set -eo
 
 # Ensure SVN username and password are set