From fe20da2bb92119bfea682f8f49af9a254208b6a6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Peter Beverloo <peter@lvp-media.com>
Date: Wed, 12 Apr 2017 09:12:34 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Editorial: improve the upfront-permission-request warning

Fixes #95.
---
 notifications.bs | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/notifications.bs b/notifications.bs
index a5aad14..587ba0f 100644
--- a/notifications.bs
+++ b/notifications.bs
@@ -814,9 +814,9 @@ method, when invoked, must run these steps:
  <li><p>Return <var>promise</var>.
 </ol>
 
-<p class="warning">In designing the platform notifications are the one instance
-thus far where asking the user upfront makes sense. Specifications for other
-APIs should not use this pattern and instead employ one of the
+<p class="warning">Notifications are the one instance thus far where asking the
+user upfront makes sense. Specifications for other APIs should not use this
+pattern and instead employ one of the
 <a href="http://robert.ocallahan.org/2011/06/permissions-for-web-applications_30.html">
 many more suitable alternatives</a>.