Ebunlomo's Oppia lesson review

[ebunadegoke]

Hi @seanlip and @ALL, here's a link to one of my oppia lesson review, kindly share your thoughts.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XbRnnGBCykN2ZkoYWAbBtDKOsU941GEqUecND09tzkk/edit?usp=sharing

Thank you.

[Chimnwendum]

Wow, love your work. It is giving strong UX Writer vibes.

My observation:

1. Where you mentioned a short explanation of what a row is, it will be cool to give the reviewers your own idea of what this short explanation should look like. You can use Google Docs to write the said explanation, screenshot it and add it to the column.

I hope this helps. All the best Ebunlomo.

[ebunadegoke]

Hi @Chimnwendum, thank you so much. Sure, it helps.

[seanlip]

@ebunsindara Thanks for your review. This is good and @Chimnwendum's comment is spot-on. The other thing I would suggest is that -- you say at the end that it would be good to make the story more concise. Pretend you are in charge of carrying out this suggestion. Can you make concrete suggestions for doing this? That would be great to see.

Also I want to point out that the last row in your table is a very astute observation and is exactly the sort of pedagogical consideration that we are looking for.

Well done. I really like what you have here.

[ebunadegoke]

Thank you for the feedback @seanlip, it is very much appreciated.