A Third Review

[Audrey-me]

hi @seanlip finally made some changes after going through the second review you gave.
you can find it here
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LucGfsiLgdNBozZOWaWAAv9mL0_2wxuwILHrzyJbtyk/edit?usp=sharing
thank you.

[seanlip]

This looks fine now, I think you've got the idea. Thanks @audrey2001!

Just a note: in your suggestions, try to pay attention to the small things. For example, "Count" doesn't need to be capitalized since it's in the middle of a sentence. But yup -- in further reviews, please make sure to follow what you've learned through this process (in terms of making specific suggestions and being explicit about the negative notes etc.). Thanks!

[Audrey-me]

thanks a lot for the review, will apply it to the other docs too