Review of 5 lessons for the first contribution

[hickmaSulley]

Hi everyone, and @seanlip. Can you peruse my review on the 5 lessons for my first task and give me your feedback. Thanks.
The link is given below:

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1rkaENP-b7N4P9nhyNT-SgUJApX8dogCd?usp=sharing

[seanlip]

Hi @hickmaSulley, I have only looked at the first document. (To keep uniformity, I'm planning to review only one doc per applicant for this task during the application period.)

Overall it looks quite good. I have a number of suggestions:

• In the second row, I'm not sure what you're referring to when you say the "concept card".
• In the second-last and third-last rows, you haven't explained what the problem is for the student.
• When you suggest an image, consider including a sketch of that image to avoid miscommunication.

Otherwise, it looks quite good. Thanks for sharing your doc!

[hickmaSulley]

Hi @seanlip, Thanks for reviewing my document and the suggestions you gave. I’ll keep them in mind and make the right changes.