Irene’s skill table, storyline and script submission

[IreneAnyadu]

Hello @Kebith @Raffysul and my fellow contributors. Below are the links for my 3 remaining documents in Task 2. Kindly review them, I await your feedback.

Thank you in advance.
Skill table
Story outline
Script

[valentina-somanya]

@IreneAnyadu weldone your skill table looks well composed. The images look good and depict the conveyed idea I must say. if I may ask, did you draw the images yourself?

NB: there are four deliverables for task 2. how about the Skill Tree?

[FrancescaIsek]

I guess she did not include her skill tree because it has already been reviewed by the mentor

[IreneAnyadu]

Hello @valentina-somanya
Thank you for your feedback, I appreciate it.🫂
No I didn't draw those pictures, they're a lot. I got them from the internet, mostly from pinterest.

My skill tree has been reviewed by our mentors and some contributors. We were instructed not to resubmit any document that has already been reviewed.

[valentina-somanya]

Oh great, then! @IreneAnyadu Is it allowed to use pictures from the internet or the ones we illustrated ourselves?

[IreneAnyadu]

For the skill table we are allowed to use images from the internet.

In our script we are to write detailed descriptions of images we want the cards to have.

And in Task 3 we're meant to illustrate at least 4 images we want to be used if our script is to be uploaded to the Oppia website.

[Kebith]

@IreneAnyadu

• Skill 1, lesson 1, nice misconception and remediation.
• Your topic development looks solid, at least for lesson 1, that I reviewed. Had enough questions, especially applied ones, and these questions were used in such a way that they broke up long texts so the students would be bored with reading. The explanation was simplified to a large extent. That's good. Only make sure you proofread and scrap words that you would find unnecessary, or try to make some definitions more concise, as you see fit.
• Please refer to the feedback I gave here (MENTORS, PLEASE REVIEW MY SKILL TREE, TABLE, OUTLINE AND SCRIPT #1359) under the skill table about prerequisite skills and number of skills.

Story outline

• That's a very detailed description of the characters you have there. But here's a question: who is Beulah? This might be a minor character, but if she is taking on more roles, you need to include her in the characters. You also do not have to talk about specific actions the character performs, that necessitated talking about Beulah yet, in the character description.
• The goal/motivation for this lesson is creative.
  Nice story outline!

Script
Don't have a lot of comments on the script.
Please check the Oppia website to see how the drag and drop interaction works. In card named: Final challenge 1, it doesn't work that way. It's sort of an ordering of a list, not a match this with this function.
Nice work overall, well done!

[IreneAnyadu]

Hello @Kebith
Thank you so much for the feedback I appreciate it.
I would read through the feedback you linked and apply it too.
Beulah was the initial name for the daughter but I changed it to Lily and it seems like I forgot to change it everywhere in the outline, I would correct that.
Thanks again!