Review of Document- What is a Percentage? Chapter 1

[Bennykillua]

Here's the link to the Percentages lessons.

Fellow contributors, what are your thoughts?

[Olivia529]

Hi @Bennykillua , I think you did a great job, your reviews are straight to the point and easy to understand. However, you might want to check your work for some spelling errors, I noticed some.

[Bennykillua]

Thanks for the feedback @Olivia529

[seanlip]

This is quite good, thanks! I don't have much feedback, only a couple of notes:

• The third row is not clear about what the problem from the student's point of view is. (Note also that it's not necessarily our aim that they get the answer right the first time. If they get it wrong and then learn from it, that's OK too.)
• In the fourth row, the "problem for the student" in the Negative Notes column is not stated clearly. There is mention of a problem for lesson reviewers but that is not the audience we are focusing on here.

I think your suggestions are quite clear, which is great. I think my main feedback is to make sure that you're very clear about what the actual problem is when writing in the second column.

[Bennykillua]

Thanks for this feedback @seanlip I will take notes of this