From 2b29d7a77ff12aacd02f2306ccfddab83fbe0565 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Liudmila Molkova <limolkova@microsoft.com>
Date: Wed, 13 Dec 2023 10:11:06 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] review comments

---
 model/registry/deprecated/http.yaml    | 16 ++++++++--------
 model/registry/deprecated/network.yaml | 22 +++++++++++-----------
 2 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)

diff --git a/model/registry/deprecated/http.yaml b/model/registry/deprecated/http.yaml
index 22f0527721..9c255eb9f2 100644
--- a/model/registry/deprecated/http.yaml
+++ b/model/registry/deprecated/http.yaml
@@ -7,22 +7,22 @@ groups:
       - id: method
         type: string
         brief: 'Deprecated, use `http.request.method` instead.'
-        deprecated: "Renamed to `http.request.method`."
+        deprecated: "Replaced by `http.request.method`."
         examples: ["GET", "POST", "HEAD"]
       - id: status_code
         type: int
         brief: 'Deprecated, use `http.response.status_code` instead.'
-        deprecated: "Renamed to `http.response.status_code`."
+        deprecated: "Replaced by `http.response.status_code`."
         examples: [200]
       - id: scheme
         type: string
         brief: 'Deprecated, use `url.scheme` instead.'
-        deprecated: "Renamed to `url.scheme` instead."
+        deprecated: "Replaced by `url.scheme` instead."
         examples: ['http', 'https']
       - id: url
         type: string
         brief: 'Deprecated, use `url.full` instead.'
-        deprecated: "Renamed to `url.full`."
+        deprecated: "Replaced by `url.full`."
         examples: ['https://www.foo.bar/search?q=OpenTelemetry#SemConv']
       - id: target
         type: string
@@ -32,12 +32,12 @@ groups:
       - id: request_content_length
         type: int
         brief: 'Deprecated, use `http.request.header.content-length` instead.'
-        deprecated: "Renamed to `http.request.header.content-length`."
+        deprecated: "Replaced by `http.request.header.content-length`."
         examples: 3495
       - id: response_content_length
         type: int
         brief: 'Deprecated, use `http.response.header.content-length` instead.'
-        deprecated: "Renamed to `http.response.header.content-length`."
+        deprecated: "Replaced by `http.response.header.content-length`."
         examples: 3495
       - id: flavor
         type:
@@ -62,10 +62,10 @@ groups:
               value: 'QUIC'
               brief: 'QUIC protocol.'
         brief: 'Deprecated, use `network.protocol.name` instead.'
-        deprecated: "Renamed to `network.protocol.name`."
+        deprecated: "Replaced by `network.protocol.name`."
       - id: user_agent
         type: string
         brief: 'Deprecated, use `user_agent.original` instead.'
         examples: ['CERN-LineMode/2.15 libwww/2.17b3',
                    'Mozilla/5.0 (iPhone; CPU iPhone OS 14_7_1 like Mac OS X) AppleWebKit/605.1.15 (KHTML, like Gecko) Version/14.1.2 Mobile/15E148 Safari/604.1']
-        deprecated: "Renamed to `user_agent.original`."
+        deprecated: "Replaced by `user_agent.original`."
diff --git a/model/registry/deprecated/network.yaml b/model/registry/deprecated/network.yaml
index a502e68243..135373fa09 100644
--- a/model/registry/deprecated/network.yaml
+++ b/model/registry/deprecated/network.yaml
@@ -12,42 +12,42 @@ groups:
         examples: ['/var/my.sock']
       - id: sock.peer.addr
         type: string
-        deprecated: "Renamed to `network.peer.address`."
+        deprecated: "Replaced by `network.peer.address`."
         brief: Deprecated, use `network.peer.address`.
         examples: ['192.168.0.1']
       - id: sock.peer.port
         type: int
-        deprecated: "Renamed to `network.peer.port`."
+        deprecated: "Replaced by `network.peer.port`."
         examples: [65531]
         brief: Deprecated, use `network.peer.port`.
       - id: peer.name
         type: string
-        deprecated: "Renamed to `server.address` on client spans and `client.address` on server spans."
+        deprecated: "Replaced by `server.address` on client spans and `client.address` on server spans."
         brief: Deprecated, use `server.address` on client spans and `client.address` on server spans.
         examples: ['example.com']
       - id: peer.port
         type: int
-        deprecated: "Renamed tp `server.port` on client spans and `client.port` on server spans."
+        deprecated: "Replaced by `server.port` on client spans and `client.port` on server spans."
         brief: Deprecated, use `server.port` on client spans and `client.port` on server spans.
         examples: [8080]
       - id: host.name
         type: string
-        deprecated: "Renamed to `server.address`."
+        deprecated: "Replaced by `server.address`."
         brief: Deprecated, use `server.address`.
         examples: ['example.com']
       - id: host.port
         type: int
-        deprecated: "Renamed to `server.port`."
+        deprecated: "Replaced by `server.port`."
         brief: Deprecated, use `server.port`.
         examples: [8080]
       - id: sock.host.addr
         type: string
-        deprecated: "Renamed to `network.local.address`."
+        deprecated: "Replaced by `network.local.address`."
         brief: Deprecated, use `network.local.address`.
         examples: ['/var/my.sock']
       - id: sock.host.port
         type: int
-        deprecated: "Renamed to `network.local.port`."
+        deprecated: "Replaced by `network.local.port`."
         brief: Deprecated, use `network.local.port`.
         examples: [8080]
       - id: transport
@@ -71,16 +71,16 @@ groups:
             - id: other
               value: "other"
               brief: 'Something else (non IP-based).'
-        deprecated: "Renamed to `network.transport`."
+        deprecated: "Replaced by `network.transport`."
         brief: Deprecated, use `network.transport`.
       - id: protocol.name
         type: string
-        deprecated: "Renamed to `network.protocol.name`."
+        deprecated: "Replaced by `network.protocol.name`."
         brief: Deprecated, use `network.protocol.name`.
         examples: ['amqp', 'http', 'mqtt']
       - id: protocol.version
         type: string
-        deprecated: "Renamed to `network.protocol.version`."
+        deprecated: "Replaced by `network.protocol.version`."
         brief: Deprecated, use `network.protocol.version`.
         examples: '3.1.1'
       - id: sock.family