From 29f3cecdb39cf01f8ae4c739d33a967b39286e3b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Michael Jones <michael_b_jones@hotmail.com>
Date: Sun, 21 Apr 2024 14:03:20 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Improved bearer_methods_supported wording

---
 draft-ietf-oauth-resource-metadata.xml | 8 ++++++--
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/draft-ietf-oauth-resource-metadata.xml b/draft-ietf-oauth-resource-metadata.xml
index 4fa2b05..0ee8a4a 100644
--- a/draft-ietf-oauth-resource-metadata.xml
+++ b/draft-ietf-oauth-resource-metadata.xml
@@ -230,8 +230,8 @@
 	  <t hangText="bearer_methods_supported">
 	    <vspace/>
 	    OPTIONAL.
-	    JSON array containing a list of the OAuth 2.0 Bearer Token <xref target="RFC6750"/>
-	    presentation methods that this protected resource supports.
+	    JSON array containing a list of the supported methods of sending an
+	    OAuth 2.0 Bearer Token <xref target="RFC6750"/> to the protected resource.
 	    Defined values are
 	    <spanx style="verb">["header", "body", "query"]</spanx>,
 	    corresponding to Sections 2.1, 2.2, and 2.3 of RFC 6750.
@@ -1434,6 +1434,7 @@
 	and the attendees of subsequent OAuth Working Group meetings for their input on this specification.
 	We would would also like to thank
 	George Fletcher,
+	Pieter Kasselman,
 	Tony Nadalin,
 	Filip Skokan,
 	and
@@ -1452,6 +1453,9 @@
 	    Applied working group last call suggestions by
 	    Atul Tulshibagwale.
 	  </t>
+	  <t>
+	    Applied wording suggestions by Pieter Kasselman.
+	  </t>
 	</list>
       </t>