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Http2 timeout documentation #22798

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Added into documentation new default timeout values of "2 minutes" under 2 classes at "Event: 'timeout'" section.

  1. Class: Http2SecureServer
  2. Class: Http2Server

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https://nodejs.org/api/http2.html#http2_event_timeout_2
https://nodejs.org/api/http2.html#http2_event_timeout_3

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Added into documentation new default timeout value of "2 minutes" inside 2 classes under "Event: 'timeout'"
1) Class: Http2SecureServer
2) Class: Http2Server
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@@ -1615,6 +1615,7 @@ added: v8.4.0

The `'timeout'` event is emitted when there is no activity on the Server for
a given number of milliseconds set using `http2server.setTimeout()`.
**Default:** `2 Minutes`.
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I would remove the backticks here, those are typically used to enclose a class name or a literal (JS) value. Also, 'Minutes' should probably be lowercased.

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Done.

removed backticks from default value
lower casing
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fixed

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Thanks for working on this. It would probably be better if the location of these defaults were more similar to the http docs: https://nodejs.org/api/http.html#http_server_timeout

Of course, these sections currently don't exist and they should also probably be created.

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Sure. working on it.

added new section for setTimeout method inside Http2SecureServer & Http2Server docs
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Please review

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Thank you for improving docs!

Just some nits)

doc/api/http2.md Outdated
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The `'timeout'` event is emitted when there is no activity on the Server for
a given number of milliseconds set using `http2server.setTimeout()`.
**Default:** 2 minutes.

#### server.setTimeout([msecs][, callback])
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Section headings are ABC-sorted, so this and the next added headings need to be placed after the #### server.close([callback]).

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If an error is thrown if no callback is assigned, should we make the callback parameter in both signatures mandatory?

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* `callback` {Function}
* Returns: {Http2Server}

Used to set the timeout value for http2 secure server requests,
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http2 secure server -> http2 server

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Used to set the timeout value for http2 secure server requests,
and sets a callback function that is called when there is no activity
on the Http2Server after `msecs` milliseconds.
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Http2Server -> `Http2Server`.

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and sets a callback function that is called when there is no activity
on the Http2Server after `msecs` milliseconds.

The given callback is registered as a listener on the 'timeout' event.
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'timeout' -> `'timeout'`

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Used to set the timeout value for http2 secure server requests,
and sets a callback function that is called when there is no activity
on the Http2Server after `msecs` milliseconds.
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Http2SecureServer -> `Http2SecureServer`

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The given callback is registered as a listener on the 'timeout' event.

In case of no callback were assigned, a new `ERR_INVALID_CALLBACK`
error will be throw.
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throw -> thrown

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and sets a callback function that is called when there is no activity
on the Http2Server after `msecs` milliseconds.

The given callback is registered as a listener on the 'timeout' event.
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'timeout' -> `'timeout'`

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The given callback is registered as a listener on the 'timeout' event.

In case of no callback were assigned, a new `ERR_INVALID_CALLBACK`
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throw -> thrown

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* `callback` {Function}
* Returns: {Http2SecureServer}

Used to set the timeout value for http2 server requests,
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Sorry, in this section, http2 secure server seemed appropriate)

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Used to set the timeout value for http2 server requests,
and sets a callback function that is called when there is no activity
on the `Http2Server` after `msecs` milliseconds.
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`Http2Server` -> `Http2SecureServer` :)

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сс @nodejs/http2

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refack commented Sep 11, 2018

Hello @sagitsofan and thank you for the contribution.
If you haven't already, it's recommended you take a look at CONTRIBUTING.md guide (especially the part about "discuss and update"). Customarily PRs are kept open for at least 48 hour so that anyone interested gets a chance to comment or review.
Also documentation changes, while easy to do are more difficult to validate. With code we can write tests and the CI can validate the change. With documentation the only way to validate is with human eyes, so don't be dismayed if you get a lot of feedback.
Anyway thank you for the contribution, and good luck 🥇

P.S. If you have any question you can also feel free to contact me directly & בהצלחה

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Thank you @refack appreciate this

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For posterity, here is the line defining the 2 minutes timeout:

const kDefaultSocketTimeout = 2 * 60 * 1000;
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LGTM

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vsemozhetbyt pushed a commit that referenced this pull request Sep 13, 2018
New default timeout values of "2 minutes" were added into documentation
inside 2 classes under "Event: 'timeout'":
1) Class: Http2SecureServer
2) Class: Http2Server

New sections for `.setTimeout()` method were added inside
`Http2SecureServer` & `Http2Server` docs.

PR-URL: #22798
Reviewed-By: Matteo Collina <[email protected]>
Reviewed-By: Colin Ihrig <[email protected]>
Reviewed-By: James M Snell <[email protected]>
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Landed in 19c0620
Thank you!

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Closed but without merging, why is that?

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vsemozhetbyt commented Sep 13, 2018

It is merged, but in some other way, not with GitHub interface. See more about this in https://github.com/nodejs/node/blob/master/COLLABORATOR_GUIDE.md#landing-pull-requests

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See also a note in https://github.com/nodejs/node/blob/master/doc/guides/contributing/pull-requests.md#step-10-landing

@sagitsofan sagitsofan deleted the my-branch branch September 14, 2018 11:23
targos pushed a commit that referenced this pull request Sep 14, 2018
New default timeout values of "2 minutes" were added into documentation
inside 2 classes under "Event: 'timeout'":
1) Class: Http2SecureServer
2) Class: Http2Server

New sections for `.setTimeout()` method were added inside
`Http2SecureServer` & `Http2Server` docs.

PR-URL: #22798
Reviewed-By: Matteo Collina <[email protected]>
Reviewed-By: Colin Ihrig <[email protected]>
Reviewed-By: James M Snell <[email protected]>
@sagitsofan sagitsofan restored the my-branch branch September 15, 2018 08:05
@sagitsofan sagitsofan deleted the my-branch branch September 15, 2018 17:16
targos pushed a commit that referenced this pull request Sep 19, 2018
New default timeout values of "2 minutes" were added into documentation
inside 2 classes under "Event: 'timeout'":
1) Class: Http2SecureServer
2) Class: Http2Server

New sections for `.setTimeout()` method were added inside
`Http2SecureServer` & `Http2Server` docs.

PR-URL: #22798
Reviewed-By: Matteo Collina <[email protected]>
Reviewed-By: Colin Ihrig <[email protected]>
Reviewed-By: James M Snell <[email protected]>
targos pushed a commit that referenced this pull request Sep 20, 2018
New default timeout values of "2 minutes" were added into documentation
inside 2 classes under "Event: 'timeout'":
1) Class: Http2SecureServer
2) Class: Http2Server

New sections for `.setTimeout()` method were added inside
`Http2SecureServer` & `Http2Server` docs.

PR-URL: #22798
Reviewed-By: Matteo Collina <[email protected]>
Reviewed-By: Colin Ihrig <[email protected]>
Reviewed-By: James M Snell <[email protected]>
kjin pushed a commit to kjin/node that referenced this pull request Oct 3, 2018
New default timeout values of "2 minutes" were added into documentation
inside 2 classes under "Event: 'timeout'":
1) Class: Http2SecureServer
2) Class: Http2Server

New sections for `.setTimeout()` method were added inside
`Http2SecureServer` & `Http2Server` docs.

PR-URL: nodejs#22798
Reviewed-By: Matteo Collina <[email protected]>
Reviewed-By: Colin Ihrig <[email protected]>
Reviewed-By: James M Snell <[email protected]>
kjin pushed a commit to kjin/node that referenced this pull request Oct 16, 2018
New default timeout values of "2 minutes" were added into documentation
inside 2 classes under "Event: 'timeout'":
1) Class: Http2SecureServer
2) Class: Http2Server

New sections for `.setTimeout()` method were added inside
`Http2SecureServer` & `Http2Server` docs.

PR-URL: nodejs#22798
Reviewed-By: Matteo Collina <[email protected]>
Reviewed-By: Colin Ihrig <[email protected]>
Reviewed-By: James M Snell <[email protected]>
BethGriggs pushed a commit that referenced this pull request Oct 17, 2018
New default timeout values of "2 minutes" were added into documentation
inside 2 classes under "Event: 'timeout'":
1) Class: Http2SecureServer
2) Class: Http2Server

New sections for `.setTimeout()` method were added inside
`Http2SecureServer` & `Http2Server` docs.

Backport-PR-URL: #22850
PR-URL: #22798
Reviewed-By: Matteo Collina <[email protected]>
Reviewed-By: Colin Ihrig <[email protected]>
Reviewed-By: James M Snell <[email protected]>
@BethGriggs BethGriggs mentioned this pull request Oct 30, 2018
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