From 5bdcfed86b88377a956ba87b8ba9c1a2f3018718 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mike Woofter <108414937+mongoKart@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Fri, 13 Sep 2024 13:41:02 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] feedback

---
 source/whats-new.txt | 26 ++++++++++++++++++++++----
 1 file changed, 22 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/source/whats-new.txt b/source/whats-new.txt
index 6880324a..176391cf 100644
--- a/source/whats-new.txt
+++ b/source/whats-new.txt
@@ -66,6 +66,7 @@ What's New in 6.9
 -----------------
 
 - Support for {+mdb-server+} 3.6 is deprecated and will be removed in a future driver release.
+
 - The driver natively supports explicit resource management for cursors and the
   ``MongoClient``, ``ClientSession``, and ``ChangeStream`` objects. When using a compatible Node.js
   version, you can implement explicit resource management by using the ``cursor.stream()``
@@ -76,6 +77,7 @@ What's New in 6.9
   GitHub. For more information about explicit resource management, see the
   :github:`ECMAScript Explicit Resource Management Proposal </tc39/proposal-explicit-resource-management>`
   on GitHub.
+
 - If you're using Node.js 18.13 or later, you can pass the ``autoSelectFamily`` and
   ``autoSelectFamilyTimeout`` options to the ``MongoClient`` constructor. When the
   ``autoSelectFamily`` option is ``true``, the driver automatically selects between
@@ -87,41 +89,57 @@ What's New in 6.9
   .. code-block:: javascript
      :copyable: true
 
-     const client = new MongoClient(process.env.MONGODB_URI, { autoSelectFamily: true, autoSelectFamilyTimeout: 100 });
+     const client = new MongoClient(url,
+       { autoSelectFamily: true, autoSelectFamilyTimeout: 100 });
+
 - The ``MongoClient`` constructor accepts the ``allowPartialTrustChain`` option. This option
   controls the ``X509_V_FLAG_PARTIAL_CHAIN`` OpenSSL flag.
+
 - The ``ConnectionCheckedOutEvent`` and ``ConnectionCheckFailedEvent`` now include a ``durationMS``
   property. This property indicates the time elapsed between the start and end of a
   connection checkout operation.
+
 - If you're using Node.js 18 or later, the driver ignores the ``cryptoCallbacks`` option
   and uses callbacks defined in C++ instead, significantly improving encryption
   performance. This change is available in the v6.1.0 version of the ``mongodb-client-encryption`` package.
+
 - To enhance security, the options specifying the spawn path and arguments for
   ``mongocryptd`` must be own properties of ``autoEncryption.extraOptions``.
   This change helps prevent global prototype pollution bugs related to these options.
   For more information about own properties, see
   `Object.hasOwn() <https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/JavaScript/Reference/Global_Objects/Object/hasOwn>`__
   on MDN.
-- Official support for Queryable Encryption (QE) range queries. To use this
+
+- Adds official support for Queryable Encryption (QE) range queries. To use this
   feature, your app must use ``mongodb-client-encryption`` v6.1.0 or later and must connect
   to {+mdb-server+} 8.0 or later. For more information about QE range queries, see
   :manual:`Queryable Encryption <core/queryable-encryption>` in the {+mdb-server+} manual.
+
 - The ``insertMany()`` and ``bulkWrite()`` methods accept ``ReadonlyArray`` inputs.
+
 - The driver retries writes based on the top-level code, found in ``error.code``, rather
   than the nested code in ``error.result.writeConcernError.code``. This fixes an issue
   in sharded clusters running versions {+mdb-server+} earlier than 4.4.
+
 - The ``LocalKMSProviderConfiguration.key`` property accepts a ``BSON`` ``Binary`` instance
   for ``AutoEncryptionOptions``.
-- In TypeScript, the ``BulkOperationBase`` class reports the ``length`` getter property. 
+
+- In TypeScript, the ``BulkOperationBase`` class reports the ``length`` getter property.
+
 - The ``MongoWriteConcernError`` type now preserves the original top-level code in
   ``MongoWriteConcernError.code``.
+
 - The ``cursor.toArray()`` method empties the current batch of documents into the array
   before calling the async iterator again. This change avoids the delays associated
   with ``async``/``await`` execution and improves performance by up to 5% on average.
   This optimization doesn't apply if you provide a transform to the ``cursor.map()`` method
   before calling the ``toArray()`` method.
+
 - Fixes mixed use of the ``cursor.next()`` method with ``for await`` syntax.
-- Fixes the ``enableUtf8Validation`` when deserializing BSON.
+
+- Adds the ``enableUtf8Validation`` option when deserializing BSON, which was
+  inadvertently removed in {+driver-short+} v6.8.
+
 - Adds the ``durationMS`` property to the ``ConnectionReadyEvent`` class. This property
   represents the time between the connection creation event and when the ``ConnectionReadyEvent``
   fires.