From 547100d7174e36fec4ad9262779bb2484a73d749 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: julieg18 <juliannagal18@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 25 May 2023 15:51:12 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Simplify setup section text

---
 .../setup/components/dvc/GitUnitialized.tsx   | 21 +++++++++----------
 .../src/setup/components/studio/Connect.tsx   |  6 ++----
 2 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/webview/src/setup/components/dvc/GitUnitialized.tsx b/webview/src/setup/components/dvc/GitUnitialized.tsx
index 0a7829388b..07ed42b98d 100644
--- a/webview/src/setup/components/dvc/GitUnitialized.tsx
+++ b/webview/src/setup/components/dvc/GitUnitialized.tsx
@@ -10,26 +10,25 @@ export const GitUninitialized: React.FC<PropsWithChildren> = ({ children }) => {
     (state: SetupState) => state.dvc.canGitInitialize
   )
 
+  const startingSentence =
+    'A Git repository is a prerequisite of project initialization.'
+
   const conditionalContent = canGitInitialize ? (
-    <Button onClick={initializeGit} text="Initialize Git" />
-  ) : (
     <>
-      <p>
-        The extension is unable to initialize a Git repository in this
-        workspace.
-      </p>
-      <p>
-        Please open a different folder which contains no Git repositories or a
-        single existing Git repository at the root.
-      </p>
+      <p>{startingSentence}</p>
+      <Button onClick={initializeGit} text="Initialize Git" />
     </>
+  ) : (
+    <p>
+      {startingSentence} Please open a different folder which contains no Git
+      repositories or a single existing Git repository at the root.
+    </p>
   )
 
   return (
     <EmptyState isFullScreen={false}>
       <h1>DVC is not initialized</h1>
       {children}
-      <p>A Git repository is a prerequisite of project initialization.</p>
       {conditionalContent}
     </EmptyState>
   )
diff --git a/webview/src/setup/components/studio/Connect.tsx b/webview/src/setup/components/studio/Connect.tsx
index 1c64f6526e..d5fdaea5c7 100644
--- a/webview/src/setup/components/studio/Connect.tsx
+++ b/webview/src/setup/components/studio/Connect.tsx
@@ -13,13 +13,11 @@ export const Connect: React.FC = () => {
         </h1>
         <p>
           Share experiments and plots with collaborators directly from your IDE.
-        </p>
-        <p>
-          An{' '}
+          Start sending data with an{' '}
           <a href="https://dvc.org/doc/studio/user-guide/projects-and-experiments/live-metrics-and-plots#set-up-an-access-token">
             access token
           </a>{' '}
-          can be generated from your Studio profile page.
+          generated from your Studio profile page.
         </p>
         <Button
           appearance="primary"