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Create a One Sheet: Undebate #55
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Checking with David on Slack channel for update. |
Reached out to David on Slack to meet and discuss |
@ddfridley @ktjnyc please provide a link to the draft in a comment here |
@ddfridley and I spoke today and I am working on writing up the first draft. I've created a google doc here: There isn't a project logo so that will need to be created. |
Draft ready for review and feedback. |
Project logo added to draft |
@ktjnyc I am a little concerned about the tone. Its confrontative without value. The language hints at some kind of partisan dog whistle even though its not. Can you find out from David what he is trying to communicate with these two lines and if its necessary.
I moved the image to the left and made it bigger. |
Reached out to David on Slack with some suggestions on changing the language for those points. |
@ExperimentsInHonesty We reviewed and made the following changes: Electing good people is important! ----> But, an informed electorate is important! Build a portal where responsible leaders can create Undebates for their elections ---> Build a self-service portal for election leaders to create Undebates for their elections |
Made additional updates to second draft |
@ktjnyc What problem were you trying to address with the previous draft? |
@ddfridley I have directed @ktjnyc to be clearer about the value proposition and take out anything that seemed like a dog whistle or judgemental about candidates since this platform is supposed to be agnostic on political spectrum. Please give Katie a chance to make a full set of revision and post final version of this draft, then we can all meet to talk about it. |
Progress: Some updates made, reached out to David on Slack for some numbers to include |
Updates made to draft @ExperimentsInHonesty to review |
@ktjnyc Looks like you have made great progress. Do you need me to weigh in on it now, or wait for more polishing? If you do want to talk to me about it, please add it to the review column with a note. |
@ExperimentsInHonesty I made some additional updates today and am ready to discuss. |
Sent invite to @ddfridley and @ExperimentsInHonesty for 2/15 @ 3 PM PST to discuss next steps. |
@ktjnyc @ExperimentsInHonesty I made a copy of draft 2 and suggested some changes: https://docs.google.com/document/d/11-fprml_ewqEUvKEYl4hahz2ku-CKtz02jqWPXVEhl8/edit?usp=sharing I look forward to our call. |
@ktjnyc @ddfridley We need to schedule another meeting. Can you both do 2pm PST / 4 pm EST on Monday the 22nd. If Yes, Katie, please send an invite out. |
@ExperimentsInHonesty I meant to bring this up earlier. 2PST works for me. I'll send out the invite once I hear from David. |
@ktjnyc I want to wrap this up. What is the latest draft that you and I worked on. The one with the percent changes on the impact section. |
@ExperimentsInHonesty - here's the last version we had. |
Overview
Create the project one sheet so it can be shared with stakeholders and funders.
Action Items
Resources/Instructions
Check issue #3 for sample one sheets
Draft Undebate One Sheet
Second Draft
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