From b3227034cc9ca24568b7dcf1217ddca97203abbb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: =?UTF-8?q?Ari=20Ker=C3=A4nen?= Date: Sat, 21 Oct 2023 21:25:32 +0300 Subject: [PATCH 1/8] typo fix --- draft-ietf-core-coap-pubsub.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-core-coap-pubsub.md b/draft-ietf-core-coap-pubsub.md index f93d6c9..2815193 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-core-coap-pubsub.md +++ b/draft-ietf-core-coap-pubsub.md @@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ topic collection: : A set of topic configurations. A topic collection is hosted as one collection resource at the broker, and its representation is the list of links to the topic resources corresponding to each topic configuration. topic-configuration: -: A set of information concerning a topic, including its configuration and other metadata. A topic configurations is hosted as one topic resource at the broker, and its representation is the set of configuration information concerning the topic. All the topic resources associated with the same topic collection share a common base URI, i.e., the URI of the collection resource. Throughout this document the word "topic" and "topic-configuration" can be used interchangeably. +: A set of information concerning a topic, including its configuration and other metadata. A topic configuration is hosted as one topic resource at the broker, and its representation is the set of configuration information concerning the topic. All the topic resources associated with the same topic collection share a common base URI, i.e., the URI of the collection resource. Throughout this document the word "topic" and "topic-configuration" can be used interchangeably. topic-data resource: : A resource where clients can publish data and/or subscribe to data for a specific topic. The representation of the topic resource corresponding to such a topic also specifies the URI to the present topic-data resource. From ab5af9bbe093ee68a7361e96fca86bec6394aec5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: =?UTF-8?q?Ari=20Ker=C3=A4nen?= Date: Sat, 21 Oct 2023 21:34:45 +0300 Subject: [PATCH 2/8] Clarify operations description --- draft-ietf-core-coap-pubsub.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-core-coap-pubsub.md b/draft-ietf-core-coap-pubsub.md index 2815193..c13d9ce 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-core-coap-pubsub.md +++ b/draft-ietf-core-coap-pubsub.md @@ -145,9 +145,9 @@ The broker is responsible for the store-and-forward of state update representati This document describes two sets of interactions, interactions to configure topics and their lifecycle (see {{topic-configuration-interactions}}) and interactions about the topic-data (see {{topic-data-interactions}}). -Topic-configuration interactions are discovery, create, read configuration, update configuration, delete configuration and handle the management of the topics. +Topic-configuration interactions are discovery, create, read configuration, update configuration, and delete configuration. These operations handle the management of the topics. -Topic-data interactions are publish, subscribe, unsubscribe, read and delete, these operations are oriented on how data is transferred from a publisher to a subscriber. +Topic-data interactions are publish, subscribe, unsubscribe, read, and delete. These operations are oriented on how data is transferred from a publisher to a subscriber.