From 4ae4e658420fd16888de6c22e89daf64e0c08fc2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Dimitri Papadopoulos
 <3234522+DimitriPapadopoulos@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Fri, 30 Jul 2021 14:37:05 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Reorder words to make sense

Increment DUA version.

I'm fixing the English text only. While I could fix French and Greek
too, I feel it is better to organize this for all languages or let
initial translators handle this.
---
 docs/source/gdpr/data_user_agreement.rst | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/source/gdpr/data_user_agreement.rst b/docs/source/gdpr/data_user_agreement.rst
index dedb218..43dc547 100644
--- a/docs/source/gdpr/data_user_agreement.rst
+++ b/docs/source/gdpr/data_user_agreement.rst
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ English
 Data user agreement for accessing identifiable human data
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-**Version:** OBC-GDPR-DUA 1.0.0
+**Version:** OBC-GDPR-DUA 1.0.1
 
 I request access to the data collected in the digital repository of the <DEPARTMENT>, part of the <INSTITUTION>, established at <CITY>, <COUNTRY> (hereinafter referred to as the <INSTITUTION SHORTNAME>).
 
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ By accepting this agreement, I become the `data controller <https://ec.europa.eu
 1. I will comply with all relevant rules and regulations imposed by my institution and my government.  This agreement never has prevalence over existing general data protection regulations that are applicable in my country.
 2. I will not attempt to establish or retrieve the identity of the study participants. I will not link these data to any other database in a way that could provide identifying information. I shall not request the pseudonymisation key that would link these data to an individual's personal information, nor will I accept any additional information about individual participants under this Data Use Agreement.
 3. I will not redistribute these data or share access to these data with others, unless they have independently applied and been granted access to these data, i.e., signed this Data Use Agreement. This includes individuals in my institution.
-4. [OPTIONAL] When sharing secondary or derivative data (e.g. group statistical maps or templates), I will only do so if they are on a group level, and cannot be deduced information from individual participants.
+4. [OPTIONAL] When sharing secondary or derivative data (e.g. group statistical maps or templates), I will only do so if they are on a group level, and information from individual participants cannot be deduced.
 5. I will reference the specific source of the accessed data when publicly presenting any results or algorithms that benefited from their use: (a) Papers, book chapters, books, posters, oral presentations, and all other presentations of results derived from the data should acknowledge the origin of the data as follows: "Data were provided (in part) by <Research centre/University Department> <University, Country>”. (b) Authors of publications or presentations using the data should cite relevant publications describing the methods developed and used by the <Research centre/University Department> to acquire and process the data. The specific publications that are appropriate to cite in any given study will depend on what the data were used and for what purposes. When applicable, a list of publications will be included in the collection. (c) Neither the <Research centre/University Department> or <University>, nor the researchers that provide this data will be liable for any results and/or derived data. They shall not be included as an author of publications or presentations without consent.
 6. Failure to abide by these guidelines will result in termination of my privileges to access these data.
 

From a774b424c1be1f45f5d2d38fe510dd86b36832d7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Dimitri Papadopoulos
 <3234522+DimitriPapadopoulos@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 5 Aug 2021 22:33:26 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] to be on a group-level: what does this mean?

I believe the intended phrase was:
	to be group-level data

I find this alternative better (4.960.000 Google hits instead of 308.000):
	to be aggregate data
---
 docs/source/gdpr/data_user_agreement.rst | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/docs/source/gdpr/data_user_agreement.rst b/docs/source/gdpr/data_user_agreement.rst
index 43dc547..15349ef 100644
--- a/docs/source/gdpr/data_user_agreement.rst
+++ b/docs/source/gdpr/data_user_agreement.rst
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ By accepting this agreement, I become the `data controller <https://ec.europa.eu
 1. I will comply with all relevant rules and regulations imposed by my institution and my government.  This agreement never has prevalence over existing general data protection regulations that are applicable in my country.
 2. I will not attempt to establish or retrieve the identity of the study participants. I will not link these data to any other database in a way that could provide identifying information. I shall not request the pseudonymisation key that would link these data to an individual's personal information, nor will I accept any additional information about individual participants under this Data Use Agreement.
 3. I will not redistribute these data or share access to these data with others, unless they have independently applied and been granted access to these data, i.e., signed this Data Use Agreement. This includes individuals in my institution.
-4. [OPTIONAL] When sharing secondary or derivative data (e.g. group statistical maps or templates), I will only do so if they are on a group level, and information from individual participants cannot be deduced.
+4. [OPTIONAL] When sharing secondary or derivative data (e.g. group statistical maps or templates), I will only do so if they are aggregate data, and information from individual participants cannot be deduced.
 5. I will reference the specific source of the accessed data when publicly presenting any results or algorithms that benefited from their use: (a) Papers, book chapters, books, posters, oral presentations, and all other presentations of results derived from the data should acknowledge the origin of the data as follows: "Data were provided (in part) by <Research centre/University Department> <University, Country>”. (b) Authors of publications or presentations using the data should cite relevant publications describing the methods developed and used by the <Research centre/University Department> to acquire and process the data. The specific publications that are appropriate to cite in any given study will depend on what the data were used and for what purposes. When applicable, a list of publications will be included in the collection. (c) Neither the <Research centre/University Department> or <University>, nor the researchers that provide this data will be liable for any results and/or derived data. They shall not be included as an author of publications or presentations without consent.
 6. Failure to abide by these guidelines will result in termination of my privileges to access these data.