Ilium tagsIdeas NUEA West Writing WIP - Work In Progress source Ilium NUEA West First 10 Pages Group notes Who’s the main character Make the unfamiliar world more familiar ELI5 Save the world building for later Cut down the garbage truck fight Mix the exposition in with the action More tension in the action scenes What are the stakes to completing the heist Personal notes Oluchi’s son and husband need to be introduced early Quick flashback to James Trider threatening? Cut down on the dialogue between the AJ, Jack, & Truc Open on the plan has changed, the kid won’t be joining Introduce the character’s wants right away