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English source text #1

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brunobord opened this issue Oct 10, 2016 · 6 comments
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English source text #1

brunobord opened this issue Oct 10, 2016 · 6 comments
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Currently work in progress.

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ref: brunobord/the-black-hack#48 (comment)

I've seen you are doing it officially. Do you want help?

Yes, help would be nice. Since I only have the printed book and an earlier Google document (that has many differences with the final copy) it's a bit of hard work.
I've managed to transcribe the text down to the "Resting" section. How about you?

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fermcg commented Oct 10, 2016

I'm behind you, but I have the pdf version. I'll copy things after that point and send you.

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fermcg commented Oct 11, 2016

I've finished it (everything after "Resting" - all in markdown). The last table is a little buggy because the last entry is too long.

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fermcg commented Oct 11, 2016

Please let me know if it's ok. (just did a pull request)

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fermcg commented Oct 12, 2016

I've double checked my review searching for things where there are numeric discrepancies and potential typos. They are:

Your Versoin
| 11. Force Field | All nearby allies gain 4 Armor Points for one minute.

My version reads 2 Armor Points

Enemies usually have 1 point of armor ... (All to a maximum of 10)

my version ends with 10 AP (not plain 10) which is more explicit

| Weapon | Cost
| Heavy Melee | 100 |

My version has a cost of 20 (yours seems more plausible)

yours:

Equipment quality & degradation

Whenever weapons ... cost of equipment by 5-20 Slugs ...

mine reads ... cost of equipment by around 5-25 Slugs ...

In your version, sometimes 'enemy' is typed with two 'n's (ennemy) - typo.

If the characters lose the fight or are unable to recover the body of a character, they character is lost forever!

(I guess it's 'that character' not 'they')

your version
Crippled - STR and DEX

my version: STR or DEX

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brunobord commented Oct 24, 2016

  • Force field
  • 10 Armor Points
  • Heavy Melee cost -- mine was correct
  • 5-25 slugs,
  • "ennemy" typo,
  • "their character",
  • Crippled STR and/or DEX

@brunobord brunobord modified the milestone: Beta release Oct 24, 2016
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