From 7c0d572918f1bcd5461f9d76d931eaa1c34b818e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Luis Cuende <me@luisivan.net>
Date: Mon, 15 Apr 2019 15:30:53 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 1/4] Copy improvements

---
 apps/finance/app/src/App.js                               | 4 ++--
 apps/finance/app/src/components/Balances.js               | 2 +-
 apps/finance/app/src/components/NewTransfer/Deposit.js    | 2 +-
 apps/finance/app/src/components/NewTransfer/Withdrawal.js | 2 +-
 apps/token-manager/app/src/components/HolderRow.js        | 2 +-
 apps/token-manager/app/src/screens/EmptyState.js          | 2 +-
 apps/voting/app/src/App.js                                | 2 +-
 apps/voting/app/src/components/NewVotePanelContent.js     | 2 +-
 apps/voting/app/src/components/VotePanelContent.js        | 2 +-
 apps/voting/app/src/components/VoteStatus.js              | 4 ++--
 apps/voting/app/src/components/VoteSuccess.js             | 3 ++-
 apps/voting/app/src/components/VoteSummary.js             | 2 +-
 apps/voting/app/src/screens/EmptyState.js                 | 2 +-
 13 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/apps/finance/app/src/App.js b/apps/finance/app/src/App.js
index a55f194c14..59ea37c4a9 100644
--- a/apps/finance/app/src/App.js
+++ b/apps/finance/app/src/App.js
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ class App extends React.Component {
                   icon={<img src={addFundsIcon} alt="" />}
                   title="There are no funds yet"
                   text="Create a new transfer to get started."
-                  actionText="New Transfer"
+                  actionText="New transfer"
                   onActivate={this.handleNewTransferOpen}
                 />
               </EmptyScreen>
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ class App extends React.Component {
           <SidePanel
             opened={newTransferOpened}
             onClose={this.handleNewTransferClose}
-            title="New Transfer"
+            title="New transfer"
           >
             <NewTransferPanelContent
               app={app}
diff --git a/apps/finance/app/src/components/Balances.js b/apps/finance/app/src/components/Balances.js
index 580e6be5fe..76242a3b84 100644
--- a/apps/finance/app/src/components/Balances.js
+++ b/apps/finance/app/src/components/Balances.js
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ class Balances extends React.Component {
     )
     return (
       <section>
-        <Title>Token Balances</Title>
+        <Title>Balances</Title>
         <ScrollView>
           <List>
             {balanceItems.length > 0 ? (
diff --git a/apps/finance/app/src/components/NewTransfer/Deposit.js b/apps/finance/app/src/components/NewTransfer/Deposit.js
index ccad8f26bb..6d66232989 100644
--- a/apps/finance/app/src/components/NewTransfer/Deposit.js
+++ b/apps/finance/app/src/components/NewTransfer/Deposit.js
@@ -300,7 +300,7 @@ class Deposit extends React.Component {
             wide
           />
         </Field>
-        <Field label="Reference (optional)">
+        <Field label="Reference">
           <TextInput
             onChange={this.handleReferenceUpdate}
             value={reference}
diff --git a/apps/finance/app/src/components/NewTransfer/Withdrawal.js b/apps/finance/app/src/components/NewTransfer/Withdrawal.js
index 20b8a53ec9..7925131a1b 100644
--- a/apps/finance/app/src/components/NewTransfer/Withdrawal.js
+++ b/apps/finance/app/src/components/NewTransfer/Withdrawal.js
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ class Withdrawal extends React.Component {
     if (recipient.error === RECEIPIENT_NOT_ADDRESS_ERROR) {
       errorMessage = 'Recipient must be a valid Ethereum address'
     } else if (amount.error === BALANCE_NOT_ENOUGH_ERROR) {
-      errorMessage = 'Amount is greater than balance held by vault'
+      errorMessage = 'Amount is greater than balance available'
     } else if (amount.error === DECIMALS_TOO_MANY_ERROR) {
       errorMessage = 'Amount contains too many decimal places'
     }
diff --git a/apps/token-manager/app/src/components/HolderRow.js b/apps/token-manager/app/src/components/HolderRow.js
index 334526c3c4..af947c2a77 100644
--- a/apps/token-manager/app/src/components/HolderRow.js
+++ b/apps/token-manager/app/src/components/HolderRow.js
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ class HolderRow extends React.Component {
                 <IconWrapper>
                   <IconAdd />
                 </IconWrapper>
-                <ActionLabel>Assign Tokens</ActionLabel>
+                <ActionLabel>Assign tokens</ActionLabel>
               </ContextMenuItem>
             )}
             <ContextMenuItem onClick={this.handleRemoveTokens}>
diff --git a/apps/token-manager/app/src/screens/EmptyState.js b/apps/token-manager/app/src/screens/EmptyState.js
index 9cd7281dba..f2cef5fe87 100644
--- a/apps/token-manager/app/src/screens/EmptyState.js
+++ b/apps/token-manager/app/src/screens/EmptyState.js
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ const EmptyState = ({ onActivate }) => (
       icon={<img src={emptyIcon} alt="" />}
       title="There are no tokens assigned yet"
       text="Assign tokens to get started."
-      actionText="Assign Tokens"
+      actionText="Assign tokens"
       onActivate={onActivate}
     />
   </Main>
diff --git a/apps/voting/app/src/App.js b/apps/voting/app/src/App.js
index f1cad6e125..6e3cac296d 100644
--- a/apps/voting/app/src/App.js
+++ b/apps/voting/app/src/App.js
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ class App extends React.Component {
           </SidePanel>
 
           <SidePanel
-            title="New Vote"
+            title="New vote"
             opened={createVoteVisible}
             onClose={this.handleCreateVoteClose}
           >
diff --git a/apps/voting/app/src/components/NewVotePanelContent.js b/apps/voting/app/src/components/NewVotePanelContent.js
index 91b36bd567..ba3ff100e0 100644
--- a/apps/voting/app/src/components/NewVotePanelContent.js
+++ b/apps/voting/app/src/components/NewVotePanelContent.js
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ class NewVotePanelContent extends React.Component {
             />
           </Field>
           <Button mode="strong" type="submit" wide>
-            Begin Vote
+            Begin vote
           </Button>
           <Warning>
             If you are allowed to directly create this vote, you will
diff --git a/apps/voting/app/src/components/VotePanelContent.js b/apps/voting/app/src/components/VotePanelContent.js
index 64e3c4513c..48d2588ced 100644
--- a/apps/voting/app/src/components/VotePanelContent.js
+++ b/apps/voting/app/src/components/VotePanelContent.js
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ class VotePanelContent extends React.Component {
           </div>
           <div>
             <h2>
-              <Label>Quorum progress</Label>
+              <Label>Total yes votes</Label>
             </h2>
             <div>
               {round(quorumProgress * 100, 2)}%{' '}
diff --git a/apps/voting/app/src/components/VoteStatus.js b/apps/voting/app/src/components/VoteStatus.js
index 5ac2345760..99f4efbfb7 100644
--- a/apps/voting/app/src/components/VoteStatus.js
+++ b/apps/voting/app/src/components/VoteStatus.js
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ const ATTRIBUTES = {
     bold: false,
   },
   [VOTE_STATUS_ACCEPTED]: {
-    label: 'Pending execution',
+    label: 'Pending enactment',
     Icon: null,
     color: theme.textTertiary,
     bold: false,
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ const ATTRIBUTES = {
     bold: true,
   },
   [VOTE_STATUS_EXECUTED]: {
-    label: 'Executed',
+    label: 'Enacted',
     Icon: IconCheck,
     color: theme.positive,
     bold: true,
diff --git a/apps/voting/app/src/components/VoteSuccess.js b/apps/voting/app/src/components/VoteSuccess.js
index 4137e1962f..85f8a91ed9 100644
--- a/apps/voting/app/src/components/VoteSuccess.js
+++ b/apps/voting/app/src/components/VoteSuccess.js
@@ -19,7 +19,8 @@ const VoteSuccess = ({ settings, vote, ...props }) => (
             <Icon />
           </IconWrapper>
           <StatusLabel>
-            {success ? 'Vote will pass' : 'Vote won’t pass'}
+            Current outcome:
+            {success ? ' Yes' : ' No'}
           </StatusLabel>
         </React.Fragment>
       )
diff --git a/apps/voting/app/src/components/VoteSummary.js b/apps/voting/app/src/components/VoteSummary.js
index 1eb98f57e7..7fa061be56 100644
--- a/apps/voting/app/src/components/VoteSummary.js
+++ b/apps/voting/app/src/components/VoteSummary.js
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ const VoteSummary = ({ vote, tokenSymbol, tokenDecimals, ready }) => {
       <Header>
         <span>
           <Text color={theme.textSecondary} smallcaps>
-            Current support{' '}
+            Votes{' '}
           </Text>
           <Text size="xsmall" color={theme.textSecondary}>
             ({Math.round(supportRequired * 100)}% needed)
diff --git a/apps/voting/app/src/screens/EmptyState.js b/apps/voting/app/src/screens/EmptyState.js
index 379c57ad88..c94828123d 100644
--- a/apps/voting/app/src/screens/EmptyState.js
+++ b/apps/voting/app/src/screens/EmptyState.js
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ const EmptyState = ({ onActivate }) => (
     <EmptyStateCard
       title="There are no votes yet"
       text="Create a new vote to get started."
-      actionText="New Vote"
+      actionText="New vote"
       icon={<img src={emptyIcon} alt="" />}
       onActivate={onActivate}
     />

From 51c8824565c1e4a4eaa4cd9b14fce7008d249953 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Luis Cuende <me@luisivan.net>
Date: Tue, 16 Apr 2019 18:47:49 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 2/4] More specific copy

---
 apps/voting/app/src/components/VoteSummary.js | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/apps/voting/app/src/components/VoteSummary.js b/apps/voting/app/src/components/VoteSummary.js
index 7fa061be56..b2cbbf23d9 100644
--- a/apps/voting/app/src/components/VoteSummary.js
+++ b/apps/voting/app/src/components/VoteSummary.js
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ const VoteSummary = ({ vote, tokenSymbol, tokenDecimals, ready }) => {
             Votes{' '}
           </Text>
           <Text size="xsmall" color={theme.textSecondary}>
-            ({Math.round(supportRequired * 100)}% needed)
+            ({Math.round(supportRequired * 100)}% support needed for approval)
           </Text>
         </span>
       </Header>

From c36a8a77a3fcc458cdcc0b15de3b6da99e3ed109 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Luis Cuende <me@luisivan.net>
Date: Wed, 17 Apr 2019 04:10:12 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 3/4] Reverting change

---
 apps/voting/app/src/components/VotePanelContent.js | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/apps/voting/app/src/components/VotePanelContent.js b/apps/voting/app/src/components/VotePanelContent.js
index 89dbd58ef1..350f47f6d0 100644
--- a/apps/voting/app/src/components/VotePanelContent.js
+++ b/apps/voting/app/src/components/VotePanelContent.js
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ const VotePanelContent = React.memo(
           </div>
           <div>
             <h2>
-              <Label>Total yes votes</Label>
+              <Label>Quorum progress</Label>
             </h2>
             <div>
               {round(quorumProgress * 100, 2)}%{' '}

From b0050624f09f8ad28d468bd5c8a79d7dfc8c43b3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Luis Cuende <me@luisivan.net>
Date: Wed, 17 Apr 2019 04:17:55 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 4/4] Change confusing token manager copy

---
 .../app/src/components/Panels/AssignVotePanelContent.js         | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/apps/token-manager/app/src/components/Panels/AssignVotePanelContent.js b/apps/token-manager/app/src/components/Panels/AssignVotePanelContent.js
index 6fa4327a61..ef0bdb3327 100644
--- a/apps/token-manager/app/src/components/Panels/AssignVotePanelContent.js
+++ b/apps/token-manager/app/src/components/Panels/AssignVotePanelContent.js
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ class AssignVotePanelContent extends React.Component {
       <div>
         <form onSubmit={this.handleSubmit}>
           <InfoMessage
-            title="Token Manager Permissions"
+            title="Token Manager action"
             text={`This action will ${
               mode === 'assign'
                 ? 'mint tokens to the recipient below'