Email copy

[ivan-unfolds]

Hi @NB76! Hope you are enjoying the sunny weather :)

In preparation for user testing next week I have been making the copy changes which were suggested in the last session. In that session it was mentioned that it would be good to put a bit more information about the app in the invitation email and also in the sign up confirmation email.

At the moment the emails are

Dear James,

You have been invited to the LCN Feedback app.

Please click on this link to complete the sign up process.

The sign up link will expire within a week. If the link has expired please contact [email protected], who will be able to provide a new one.

Thanks,

The LCN Team

Dear Ivan,

You are now signed up to the LCN Feedback app.

Thanks,

The LCN Team

Please let us know if you would like to add anything to these before the session next Wednesday.

[NB76]

Hi Ivan,

Just picked this one up - it's been hiding among the avalanche of emails into my inbox. No big changes suggested - see below.
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Dear James,
You have been invited to the LCN Feedback app. The app would help each person in each Law Centre share some basics about their work, and see what is happening elsewhere across the network.
To join, please click on this link to complete the sign up process - you will only need to do this once.
The sign up link will expire within a week. If the link has expired please contact [email protected], who will be able to provide a new one.
Thanks,
The LCN Team
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Dear Ivan,
You are now signed up to the LCN Feedback app - welcome! Please check in at a regular time during your week to feed in and keep up with what's happening.
If you experience any issues logging in, please contact [email protected].
Thanks,
The LCN Team